omg it's so weird but very very hot

I know alot of your work and just found this. Even though I know it wont happen, I'd love to see this as a full story of them two together.

Who is the father of bella?

That was hot!

Looooooveeee ittt

Excellent, and so well written. Thanks
You gave everyone fair warning, but they still couldn't stop flapping their gums.

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I really liked it!

Wow this was great !

I do love this story but when I'm reading it I have to imagine it's a step-father and step-daughter relationship instead of father and daughter (otherwise it creeps me out).

Love it

I think ive read this before...and I gotta say this is pretty freaking gross. I thought for sure it was at least a step dad thing and I'm disgusted it wasn't...I hope the mom haunts his ass and seriously whats wrong with a daughter that wants her father? shes gotta have some serious issues ya know. and that dad jesus he should be killed for real.

Where can i read more of your work? I love it

I think ive come by this before and I was thinking it was daddy kink or like a step situation...but this is just gross I mean its hot if you think of it as just bella and Edward and some weird daddykink thing but everytime he says daddy or she does I want to throw up and slit his throat cause seriously this kind of incest is the sickest...I mean a cousin or whatever if their both fucktards and adults whatever..but this is just sick. theres gotta be something wrong mentally with both of them ya know...cause ewww reminds me of that woody guy didn't he marry his step daughter...wtf?