This was a surprisingly good story though I am sad to see you didn't continue it or mention who else may have. However you did leave off at a perfect spot.

could you tell me who is continuing it

who is continuing this story and this story is great, buts ok!

Honestly, I am falling in love with your writing style. It's so... I don't know how to describe it, but I just adore it. You mentioned in your last Author's Note someone has taken it up and continue it. I cannot help but to ask, who is this lovely Author? I must read the continuation of this fandom. It's my first time reading NarxKag, and so far, I am becoming an addict to it.

I sure do hope you answer my feedback.

Thank you for this two wonderful chapters!

I loved it and will be looking forword to the sequel...

btw, so your writing the sequel? or someone else is?

sorry i'm just a little confused.

You said that this story is being continued by someond else.

It breaks my heart, but it's your decision.

Where can I find its continuance?

I love how you kept Naraku evil in this story. Most people turn him good.

oh,so your not continuing...well Anyways, could you tell who is continuing the story? so we could continue reading at least?

Finally what took her so long to go bad? LOL

Why dontcha try to finish one first do it one at a time take your time and ignore the rude coments.

wow, that was some seriously cool writing. the nar/kag pairing is really delicious to red and i can't wait to read more.

omg i luv ur story it truley is wonderous and i really hope u continue on to a 3rd chapter, I enjoyed it veyr much and cant wait to see what happens between naraku and Kagome , and to see the way inuyasha deals with it. PLease update soon :

O yay! So good! :) haha. Yay! TTFN! -Dunny

Whoa! Holy crap. I did NOT expect that ending. Wow.. I need to keep reading.. and if I don't get to finish it tonight.. then I'll read the rest soon. It's kinda late. Nice job though. I likey lots! :) -Dunny

Whoah- *you* wrote this?