No. Kurenai’s “apology” was fucking lackluster. When Naruto made a mistake, you had him begging and suffering for forgiveness and punished. You drew that shit out. But when Kurenai fucked up big time (including telling her own student to kill himself), all she needed to do was say a measly “I’m sorry”?

Go fuck yourself, author.

I can't finish this story. I just can't stand it anymore. I tried to get past that Naruto is BEYOND KAGE level at only 13 years old coming out of the first Wave Arc, he's a billionaire, he's an edge lord, all the waifus want to shag him, but he refuses like a TROPEY SHONEN F*GGOT, all of the supporting characters are either stupid, unreasonable or weak fodder trash and a completely broken main antagonist that can steal kekkei genkais and fodderize KAGE level shinobi like Gaara and Kakashi. It was when you gave naruto stupid f*cking God eye bullsh*t, combined with his other kekkei genkai that's even more broken than the Rinnegan, this just became another fic with an OP protag/antagonist and everyone else is fodder/stupid/bland/non existant UNLESS IT IS A CLONE OF THE PROTAGONIST OR ANTAGONIST. I'm out. This fic sucks. Go jump off a bridge while in a potato sack. Reeeeeeeeee!

Damn... That part about being balls deep in a woman fucking scared me... Like... How old was naruto when that happened and why didn't he chase the dude?

Still... Pretty good fic it's just... That caught me off guard.

I'm trying to read what's going on with the trial, Naruto not learning who his parents are, sakura getting killed earlier back in the previous chapter, really caught me off guard with that random mention of... Rape? I honestly choked on my drink because of that... What's with the villagers not caring about the man possibly having raped someone? Like ok they dicks but I mean... Fuckin' hell why do I love this fanfic?! It's so dark but when it's not it's so weird, it's really fuckin' good. Still... Goooooooooooood god! Fuuuuuuuuuuuck the villagers! They're dicks! They don't seem to have patrols for simple crime! What is thiiiiiiiiis. You'd think the woman would have reported him for the obvious but no... Pretty glaring problem since they have people in the village who can see if it's true... Better yet why naruto not tell hokage for that incident? What the fuck...

I probably fogot a chapter it's just been so long since I was on this fic and just... God... Still good... But god...

Alv

That was... Yikes.

Just a quick fix. I noticed you used chan as a way to denote importance. chan in Japanese is used solely as an affectionate for those of the female gender whilst kun is used for males.

Hello,

I'm not joking when I say this is one of the better fanfictions on this site. It's really quite hard not to just spout shit and say how much I'm in love with this version of Naruto and the way you write.

Fantastic job

Not a huge fan of the super powerful edgelord OC or the fact that all the characters I'd normally like are made out to be scum.

Honestly I hope naruto kills shika for all this.

hmm, f**k hinata, that's all I'll say lol

it's been amazing I love the direction you went within the wave arc

Ok while I agree Naruto doing that was a boneheaded move like sasuke pointing out the genjutsu on the first floor if he didn’t then Sakura would have quit

Chapter 28 was something. Although in my interest that i was eating at the same time reading the whole piecexor mutilation and feeding his his innards. I continue to eat despite what i was reading. I may have a problem of sorts if that didnt faze me one bit. I guess i can start workng in a morgue now lol.

Ih kami you’re going to pull an itach vs sasuke with Naruto and ita fighting in a huge fight and Naruto being overwhelmed but ita is too weak and slams his face into a wall and pokes Naruto in the head transfering all his power thus Naruto breaks the 4th wall and becomes a real boy and kills us all and then.. SHUT THE HELL UP OMOI YOUR BEING PARANOID AGAIN!

Ok so this cleared up a lot but the structure was annoying. I hated how it went back and forth between past and present. It works on tv if done right but this just made it irritating