Already this story has sucker punched me. I shall now continue

Awe.. beautiful. First book in a while that hasn’t made me sad that it was ending or with questions. I hope to see you write more with Rosalie as the lead.

Good final chapter.

Thanks for updating!

I can’t wait for the final chapter.

Me encanta la historia . Gracias por actualizar . Éxitos!

Amazing so great love it

I love to read odd and different fanfictions so seeing yours was a real treat. I love the way it started out and how he was kinda tortured but not overly. I do wish you would have built up the relationship between them more before you ended it but I also appreciate that you finished it and didn't just abandon the story.

14. Chpter 14. then Danliel never returned MMMAULD TO DEATH Torn to pieceswith best friends murdered by nomads drained Blod found by Medics he was sickest dying from a rare illness Reyerson's Disease passed away in Forks General Medical Place the head found the young man gasping wheezing was with the Spainh flu combined with VVenom coursed in his blod too late with them bitten HHim hardest with best friends created second kids now as Daniel Cullen with the new Cullen kids found guilty with others ATOMIZED/Vaporized torn into pieces offically good bring them here then too late killed then the head found him with them he was deceased with them blown apart punished then ripped freely cursed by them smashed from here TAKEN From them good then bought here then killed them from them their guards birthed here then the cause of death murder but killed he had a planet power so they then it was too late emerged but awakened for too long Alice they been attacked but the venom is activated reached you never be humans crap my throat is killing me I Sense a Deer Be right back drained it wholliest no thanks I am Vegetarian Then with as all of most more animals as all monstrously then suddenly As all gone on a Diet of Animals needed more then As all of them drained from here then Trapped them blew apart then fled from help of the very as all gods/goddesses each planetary both nuked good bring three then it happened he converted with them that was it eyes went fiery yellow /black too late he was Immortal so they were with as all of from around the world's corpses nulled now Deceased offically good then Flames with as all of kills then with them suddenly too late burnt to a crisp then then too late Alice felt him oh my god her's what Dead with a Soul like Angel correct urgh what happened you can't age then holy crap I am built he's very handsome if he could blush he was embarrassed oh man you are Muscular oh god Listed of things young man you are vastly logical then now enrolled oh god the Cullens he's very sexy that he had a problem he was a Telekinetic mind shield could read thought telepathically perfectly too late they were the kids of the famliles were unable to work.

Awesome can’t wait for more hope you update soon

Only thing I could see that was wrong was that forks doesn't have an airport the closest one is in Seattle other than that great first chapter.

Still here.
Miss you.

Yesssss! Looking good here with this story! Please do continue it. :3

Love your story! Please continue. Please.

I love it!
Please Please continue!