| Reviews for An Unexpected Outcome |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 6/24/2018 UPDATEEEEE |
| KilluaInuzuka chapter 6 . 1/2/2017 Byakura and Yuni-chan |
| KilluaInuzuka chapter 4 . 1/2/2017 Ummmh, etto, que la Famiglia Akuma sea en realidad la décima generacion pero ellos lo confundieron?~ Espero que asi sea, quiero las galletitas - Inuzuka Killua |
 LavaLilly chapter 10 . 1/1/2017 Ship when do you plan to continue |
| Mara fray chapter 10 . 6/8/2016 Good Tsuna is back |
| justsomeone chapter 10 . 6/8/2016 I enjoyed it:) it's interesting to read. Keep it up db Can't wait for the next chapter |
| Foxluna chapter 9 . 4/28/2016 I wonder why Bermuda and Jaeger showed up? And Tsuna may need to tell Giotto and them who he is. So they all can avoid any surprises. And surprises during battle is bad. Least that will be one they can avoid. I wonder if they can get the 10th Gen there. Wouod prob help since somehow the Akuma have future weapons and the 10th Gen have their own so they can fight them. Let me know when u update please id really enjoy reading what happens next. |
| Apple Of Eris chapter 9 . 4/7/2016 Woo! This is getting good! |
| Natsuyuuki chapter 9 . 4/4/2016 Very well... thank you for update! :3 |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/1/2016 i'd really appreciate that you have longer the story than in chapter 8, thank you :D but, oh come on, why so cliffhanger? i have the feeling that tsuna's condition will be more worst because of the poison but i hope he will not like that :( |
| Frwt chapter 9 . 4/1/2016 Ehh? Why is vindice coming? |
| HibarixTsunaxlover chapter 9 . 4/1/2016 omg the vindice. i can't wait to see the next chapter |
| Hailbreeze chapter 8 . 3/22/2016 Update pretty please! |
| animelove22 chapter 8 . 3/21/2016 please update soon this s a good story |
| Al David chapter 1 . 3/11/2016 So I finally got to this! I like the idea of the story, although I have seen a few fics like this. Still, most of them have poor grammar, while yours does not, so that immediately makes this story stand out. Some of the dialogue and inner thoughts are a bit awkward. For example, at the start when Yamamoto mentions "it's summer" when Tsuna would know as much. I get the need to drop exposition so the reader can follow what's happening, but it can also knock someone like me out of the story. Your characterization is mostly on point, although Gokudera seems a bit exaggerated. You could also describe the characters some more. Yes, as fans we may know who you're talking about, but it's a bad habit to form to ignore basic descriptions. Anyway, this was some decent fun. I'll make sure to check out the rest of the story. Please, keep writing! It's how you improve! |
