Interesting
It's been a while since you updated
I loved the chapter.

I guess the next update will be "Colors".
I've been waiting for your next chapter.

Yay! I'm so very excited about the new chapter, though I've only read the first part so far. The line break bookmarks seem to work perfectly for me, what an awesome idea!

Yay! A new chapter! I’ve been looking forward to this for a while now, and I’m so glad to see that it’s arrived! I’m very interested to know what will happen next. Thanks for another great chapter!

Finally, a new chapter! The greatness of this has no rival.

Hello! I absolutely love this story. It's so different from any other story I've found for The Legend of Zelda fandom, and it really inspires me in my own work. I love the mixture of action, dialogue, and description you add, and the characters are all so unique and lovable in their own ways. I remember reading the previous story in this series when it first started coming out before I had my account, and I have been following both of your stories as an anonymous viewer. I would absolutely recommend this series to anyone looking for a new fanfiction to read. 11/10 rating from me! Anyways, I just wanted to take the time to thank you, as your works have been a huge influence on my stories and my growth as a writer. So, from the bottom of my heart: thank you. I really hope you continue to be an inspiration to writers like me in the future!

MMMmm i don't wanna waste my review, but- is this posted on Ao3 as well? Or is there a way i could download a pdf of the whole thing? Sites like and ao3 block during the day, but they can'r block pdfs, and I really wanna re-read this again!

Oh my

(Whoops, went a bit on a rant here, but I had so much to love haha).
At first I was thinking, "was Aryll here all this time," and then I realised it was a flashback. So sweet!
This might actually be my favorite chapter so far though! The conversation with Link and Kid left me sobbing, really all the odds were stacked against him and he even had to prove himself during his quest. The conversation between Zelda and Link was the cherry on top, Zelda tends to be a bit distant (I wonder if her upbringing as a princess also caused her to keep her own problems inside), so her opening up like that about her worries for Tetra was really heart-warming. Maybe she needs to do that to Tetra too.
I also wonder if Tetra has a more specific reason for doubting Anjean so much, especially because she was the first to meet her and Anjean healed her. Oh and then you end right before the fight! I hope it goes well, since they bickered so much beforehand.
I look forward to the next chapter! :D

What the heck Anjean? !

WHY DO YOU END WITH A CLIFHANGER?! I'm going to cry. I want to know what happens next. I'll be waiting for the next upload, but obviously do the more important things first. See you next upload.

Ah so nice how you’re incorporating Spirit Tracks into this! I do feel a bit bad for poor Anjean though, but I guess she was already a bit peculiar in ST. I love how she’s straight up dragging out all the things they’re trying to hide though. Heh that last sentence tells me Link is not going to get rid of her that easily. Them having to slowly warm up to her could be interesting!

Oh and I feel kind of bad for never really commenting before! (I should start doing it from time to time). I’ve been following this story ever since the Alternate Link and this is probably my favorite ongoing Zelda fanfiction out there! So thank you so much for continuing this story all this time! I’m always looking forward to the next chapter! :D

*loud gasp* THIS IS SPIRIT TRACKS, ARE THEY GOING TO MEET THE HERO OF TRAINS AND TETRA'S DESCENDANT

FREAKING ANJEAN OH MY GOD

Link and Kids' relationship gives me life

Enjoyed your chapter and how you had written the interactions between Link, Kid and Midna.