gorgeous story!

All the feels! I especially liked, how you portrayed Ace. In the beginning he didn't realize how precious Luffy was to him. At least that is how I imagine it.
Somehow I got curious, what exactly Dadan's chores are.

If luffy's the sun when he smiles, what is he when he's crying? Can't help to wonder what ace felt when he was at marineford and luffy was crying ;-;

Oh the brotherly love. Luffy is Ace's and Sabo's greatest treasure after all. Really sweet, touching story.

Simple and short, but it has that feeling of true connection between brothers. Sweet moments all round, and I loved every single word of it! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

I'm so in love with that brothers!

(clap clap clap) That was beautiful!

Yes. And Yes - this is precious :) Thanks so much for writing this up! :)

I liked how Sabo described Luffy's smile and somehow this made me feel somewhat melancholic, in a sense that in order for the world to not part yet with that kind of smile, Ace sacrificed himself. Wait, you know what - I'm going to watch the Marineford Arc again and butcher my own feels :'D