There's a major question that comes to mind here. What will be left of Owen if one of the raptors die? If Blue dies, or worse, the whole pack? If his net and anchor all die, will he even survive?

Aw. Sad Barry isn't officially joining.

Loved it will you ever make more.

Ambas historias son lo más hermoso que he leído, lo amo ️

Wow:)

Ahhhhh so so good!

Hello there :) I just wanted to take the chance to say WOW. This (along with the original fic tainted) are astounding masterpieces! You are so so so insanely talented and I just wanted to make sure you got the opportunity to hear this! I watched the two Jurassic world movies and loved them so I really wanted to get into some fics and I discovered your writing and gosh again, these works blew. me. away. Wow. Couldn’t have done it any better. Especially the way you describe the special bond between Owen and the pack, I also really liked how you seamlessly included many details and the thoughts of the characters into the story. It’s very unique and wow omg just so so good! Thank you for writing this! I enjoyed them so so much :) Hope you have a nice day!

P.s. do you think you will make it a trilogy? Or some fluffy one shots in the future? (Please please don’t think I’m pressuring you at all! Only if you want to!)

I love re-reading both of your Jurassic park fics, they're wonderfully written.

to be continued

What happened to Mason Greene was very satisfying

raptor enclosure application requires someone similar to Owen's background in my opinion

I really enjoy re-reading Tainted/Threshold Shift. And this last time I read them, I realized that the personalities you gave the raptors mirror that of TMNT! (More like a carnival mirror, I guess,...Similar, but distorted). I’m not saying that you based them off of the TMNT, but it was just a funny parallel that popped into my head while reading.

BlueLeo (the leader when Splinter isn’t around, closest to Splinter/Owen)
CharlieDonny (level-headed thinker, less emotional than the others)
DeltaRaph (hot-headed, more agressive than the others)
EchoMikey (the fun loving, curious and goofy youngest)

Keep writing!
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I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

DaAaaaamn, i enjoyed this, i wanna cry cos its over but im too happy bubly fuzzy warm to do so. your fault, what a ride though, you just took me on the emotional rollercoaster of a lifetime. thank you

OMG i just wrote a review to your previous work tainted, and was checking out your other works when, BANG i see this, A SEQUAL *Screams of delight*

and such a great intro it was, ahhh, Next Chapter *Happy Squeeels*