Okay, I'll be as nice as possible. This was an interesting concept but terrible. The writing was awful. Your grammar and spelling was painful to read. If you would have read back through (or swallowed your pride and gotten a beta) this would have been loads better. I know this story is ages old but I had to review. I read it in its entirety and was very disappointed. Hopefully your writing has improved since 2005 or whenever it was you wrote this. Also, phrases like "chappie" and "cliffy" are incredibly annoying. Just write the word out. Invest in a spellchecker or a beta.

I am amused by your light-hearted way of portraying H. and S.S . Your
explanation of grading, and level-questions were stimulating and you have a deft and original touich;
But your spelling is ... way out there, and the tenses of verbs are confusing, as are the commas.
I, as a reader, know I place them helter-skelter, but I'm not publishing a story to be read by thousands of people. So it is very enjoyable, and frustrating in equal measure.
Please swallow your pride, and ask for a beta. Even the very top writers like TextualSphinks , Caeria, Ariadne, and many others freely acknowledge their debt to these ladies and gentlemen, and how much they learn from discussions of the finer points of style. Please, do take the hint.

Oh my gosh I LOVE this story! U did an amazing job and I can see that u put so much effort into it!

Wow! That rocked! Loved it!

Amazing story! I loved it, I can't wait to read your other wonderful works! :D

Fantastic, I Loved It, Truly Amazing! xx

This has got to be the best hermione/snape fanfic I've ever read! The plot's great and the characters never go OOC (obviously the there's the thing with Ron and the bisexuallity, but hey, you've got to change things for the sake of a great fanfic!). Absolutly brilliant!

Wow. That was a very good story! I loved it!

Wow... this was a very well written story. I like it very much.

~Jen

Hi

I have to say that I loved your chapter as well as the story.

Violet44

not a huge Snape Hermione fan but i thought it would be good to try it out. your fic was great i really liked it. congrats on nthe great fic! :)

my god, that was the best snape/hermione story ive EVER read.

Aw, so sweet.

Cute, fluffy and adorable.

I enjoyed this very much.

That was fantastic! Loved reading it, well done Relena! I loved the connection between Hermione and Munin - that was really clever. Keep it up!

x x x