You say Euphie has no reason to suspect Kallen of being the Red Knight, but there is still Suzaku's first testimony after Shinjuku. So Euphie knows Clovis' prisoner was a 'young' woman with green hair and she was saved by a Britanian-looking girl with red hair. I'm sure Ruben's comment that it was also a green-haired woman who extracted Nunally renewed her interest in the subject. Now that she's met C.C. in Kallen's company, and Kallen expresses pretty pro-Number views, well, I wonder if her Geass can give her the probability of such a coincidence.

"Houston owes its victory to a lot of luck and mistakes on the Mexican side" As a Mexican it pained me to read this, aaaaggg damn

hopefully the britannians were defeated by the aliens,may they choke in their arrogance and the traitor lelouch who betrayed his adopted homeland be there to watch it.

Damn, you really fucking hate Suzaku. There is no fucking reason why they couldn't, rightfully, put the blame on Lelouch, only he's obviously a special fucking snowflake who must be protected.

After all, he was a fucking French intelligence operative, and the fact they he caused over 5 million deaths as well as that of the entire royal family bar one would go along way to helping Britannia justify the war with the EU.

All they have to say is Suzaku is trying to continue what Lelouch started, not outright blame him for the whole thing.

I thought Kallen and Euphie whole big thing was to get rid of, or at least decrease, corruption and nepotism/family favoritism, when they're actually doing fucking worse the the Empire ever did.

Fucking Hypocrites.

Cole/Kallen and Rai/Euphie still make no fucking sense whatsoever. Both are showing massive shades of Ron/Hermione - pairings that make no fucking sense but that the author is determined to do for some fucking reason despite all points to the contrary.

One fucking date and a couple of conversations, and one personal conversation apparently equals true love and marriage.

I mean, come-fucking-on, Kallen and Cole have had one actual date, have barely seen each other, and have virtually nothing personal in common and are already talking about marriage and kids! And not just for political reasons either!

I gather you're a fan of Dany/Jon then, seeing as you're forcing another nephew/aunt pairing.

Rai is so much of a gary stu it hurts.

Character travels back into to fix history, is super powerful, apparently really nice and everyone loves him, and ends up marrying the girl (who falls in love with him after a single one-to-one personal conversation).

Funny how Susaku is forever blamed for things he didn't do, while Lelouch doesn't for even worse things he actually did.

Rai/Euphemia?! FUCKING REALLY?! THAT MAKE'S NO FUCKING SENSE!

And no, you really haven't demonstrated slow and steady, because Cole and Kallen makes no fucking sense either.

So Lelouch is still alive then. of FUCKING COURSE HE IS.

Fucking idiots, the lot of them, if they'd have just killed Lelouch as soon as they could they all could have been avoided. But no, he's a special fucking snowflake.

And the most RAGE INDUCING THING! They don't even fucking realise that all that could have been avoided by killing Lelouch as soon as they soon him. With the amount of delay and damage he caused, they could have EASILY taken out V.V before he even got close.

I genuinely cannot believe how much of a super special snowflake you have made Lelouch. My God.

Fucking hell. Lelouch is such a special snowflake it is fucking unbelievable. Fucking hell. Absolutely awful.

so. much. plot. armour. Un-FUCKING-believable. Lelouch has had more plot armor in this fic' then he has in canon.

The stuff with Claire is absolutely fucking insane. So you're not only telling me a trained Inquisitor is not only that trusting right from the off - i.e. before Lelouch could even USE his Geass - but that Monica, a LORD INQUISITOR is not regularly checking that one of the LEADER'S of the investigation into a MIND CONTROLLER is not compromised.

Literally everything that has happened with Lelouch over the entirety of this fic so far has taken immense amount of plot armor and coincidence.

First all the fact that he is even in the position to begin with - he's a TEENAGER, there's is no fucking way the leadership of France's Intelligence services would be letting 2 teens be on a mission to as vital an area as Japan let alone letting a group of teens lead a mission to the CAPITAL OF THE MAIN ENEMY IN A WORLD WAR. Which means he MUST have compromised the majority of the leadership - when he was virtually on his own and not as competent with his geass, because he must have had to do it a while ago and slowly (quickly would be even more SOD breaking).

Then even once he's in Japan, how easily he was able to compromise both the leadership Samuri guys and then the JLF with only one guy getting suspicious - and even then right at the end of the game.

And so far in Britannia's it's been even worse. The fact that he hasn't been crushed by the Inquistion let alone the Directorate is fucking ridiculous. Euphie has faced more opposition from the Britannian government in trying to sort out Japan - even with the help of it's head of military and parliament - then Lelouch has in TRYING TO KILL THE ENTIRE IMPERIAL FAMILY.

The fact that he hasn't been crushed by several geass user's despite them being RIGHT on their FUCKING doorstep is more idiotic then anything in the entirety of the anime.

No, fuck off with that crap. No fucking way would a trained intelligence operative, especially one as good as Claire is implied to be, not be remotely fucking suspicious that some random stranger approaching them would act that way OR GIVE THEM FREE FOOD, goddamn SHE DIDN'T EVEN CHECK IF THE FOOD WAS POISONED!

SO much that has happened with Lelouch is goddamn convenient. He is Geass isn't that strong! It's brute force compulsion more than anything else. And No FUCKING way would it be able to make said operative not at all suspicious in that short a time - which can be the only answer for her being that trusting.

Dammit, wish I didn't know you considered a EuphiexKallen pairing, they would have been awesome.

Until now, the fic seems really promising. Your Euphemia is something I would have liked to see in canon. What bothers me however is, that apparently Lelouch committed suicide. I just can't see that happening, he wouldn't do anything to compromise Nunnally's happiness this strongly. Sure, he calculated that he might die in battle, while trying to create a better world for Nunnally (one of his main reasons he started his rebellion), but in my opinion he only did so, because he believed he had a real chance to survive long enough for his rebellion to bear fruits. I however used the word "apparently" in my second sentence, because you wrote that people asked you about Lelouch and Nunnally and that you answered the question about one of them, leaving us rraders to draw further conclusions. I understand that message as us being told that Nunnally is alive and more or less well. "Apparently" her brother committed suicide, however we only see that from Milly's Point of View. With those hints, I came to the conclusion that there might be a fair possibility of Lelouch appearing in this fic eventually, in some side role (with Euphemia and Kallen being the main characters now). I'll find out soon enough, and though I hope to find Lelouch, I can live if he simply is dead for convenience's sake. (Though it would still be out of character for Lelouch)