You made an amazing story! This is a work of art. You are awesome!

I really like this story. You made both of my favorite movies come together and make something amazing. Keep up the good work.

That. Was. Just. Awesome.

Yay! Great job, I really enjoyed this story. Sad to see it end, but I enjoyed reading it from a different perspective. Thanks for writing this!

This was a fantastic story! :)

Yay! That was a GREAT chapter! And you did a GREAT job on Hiro's emotions!

Can't wait for the extras!

You did a great job with this, I've really enjoyed how you portrayed Hiro's internal struggles.

YAAAAAAAAAAAY

THIS FAN FICTION IS AMAZING!

Totally looking forwards for the extras as well. This is a REALLY well done fan fiction and I am super impressed! Congratulations on your work of epicness!

And...

Please. Don't say 'What could happen'. Please don't. He's a superhero saving the entire city, SOMETHING is going to go wrong and you know it.
But then again, better ending on a positive note, right?! XD

Anyways, congratulations on finishing this fan fiction. Good work, and can't wait to see what you do for the extras!

good story

ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVAH READ!

What am amazing finish!

Good chapter; I felt you did a good job in capturing the emotions of each particular character

Yay! I'n so excited for the next chapter! XD

No, that's okay, it was AMAZING and AMAZINGLY HEARTBREAKING YAAAAY!

Um- one line thing.

"I'm not giving up on you. You don't understand this yet, but people need you. So let's get back to work"

But anyways, it was adorable, and amazing, and awesome, and you RULE AT THIS!

And ALMOST DONE, YAY! YOU GET TO WRITE ABOUT EVERYBODY FAILING MISERABLY! :D

As always, keep up the good work, I am forever impressed- as always

Not to worry, you made a great decision having the emotions be silent- silence builds a lot of tension when it's done right, as well as long, thoutful paragraphs. That said, this brought the sadness from the movie straight back to me, I even teared up a little. It certainly didn't help that Joy was thinking the same things I've always thought about Tadashi being gone. It just hurts so badly. But, this whole section happens to be my favorite part of the movie, so I'm glad it got this awesomely-written chapter.

Very well done, and I'm looking forward to see how it wraps up!