wow this is bad, everything is twisted to the point nothing makes sense

this flying car part is not exactly new given that the whole of hogwarts knew about it

Alrighty! The build was interesting, but now you’re in the thick of it. You’ve definitely got the appropriate approach regarding his learning (of his gifts, if his heritage, etc). The goblin thing was a bit more than anticipated but screw it. It was fun!

Did you mean "a wave of magic crawls"?
Touché, Tiberius Ogden!
Did you mean for Andromeda Tonks to say "One of the best students", without an apostrophe?
And for Charlus Potter to say "The Americans had", also without an apostrophe?

Hi,
A very interesting story that manages to avoid many of the tired tropes of HP fan fiction. The goblin war was an exciting interlude and andromeda is well written.

Chapter 16

Um... Patronus much?

Excellent story so far

This is great. I hope to read more soon. I am enjoying this. Is Hermione going to continue in this story? Are they going to patch things up? Is Hermione going to figure out that her hero worship is not good? Those people are not right all the time.

Great update.
Looking forward to when they head back to Hogwarts and he meets up with Hermoine again after that slap.

Great fic, the way hegrew after Sirius's death was a great diversion point from Canon, and i love the way HArry is sharper and more willful, the leaps he did to support himself are well defined and realistic, Andromeda's teaching is a masterstroke worthy (or better than) Canon (i always wondered how a boy that wants family so much never really sought for more than he did in canon, that's fixed here)

it's the first time i read about goblin society civil/clan wars in that scale and motivation, and it was both heartpumping and refreshing, though you can probably expand on the repercussions a bit more (harry-goblins relationship, fines and or bounties, the vaults, etc...)

don't forget about the Mother's Trunk, his Father's Bag, and the explanation on the Mail Wards

Cheers to you mate, and great story
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Fun story, looking forward to more

I really love where you're going with this story. I would like to see a discussion between Mrs Granger and Hermione that helps her light go on about what she said and did that sparked the blow up. Both know the family pictures don't include Harry, Hermione knows about the Dursley's treatment to a degree although pointed questions should bring that forward. She also is bound to know that Dumbledore arranged for Harry to be with the Dursley family... and other marginal decisions. Right now she's focussing on how hurt she is, she needs a mom to say 'You did what! You said what! Think about it'. I bet you could rock that scene if it tickles your fancy and fits in with your plan. Overall, I love what you've done. Thank you for writing. It's a sign of quality when it gets the brain saying, oh what if.

Fabulous chapter!

Great job keep it up. I feel sorry for the people on Harry bad side. The goblins that raided Gringott's learned that the hard way. Update soon