Dang! Thanksgiving dinner with this crew must have been a delight! Not.

They paid all right!

Have u ever thought to make it a multi-chapter story? Would love to read that...

Bitch, you are going to pay too. I saw what you bunch of cunts posted in the page and you liking that post. You are just a bunch of good for nothing. I hope you all drop dead.

Just stumbled upon this short O/s and it's different difficult to imagine such a dark Edward but it has so much potential for expansion and it leaves you wanting more so great job and you really should think about expanding the story I would be happy to read:) great job.

Good morning Mina I hope all is well. I found this on your list. Actually I was going to start reading the The Perfect Girl again but haven't seen an update in awhile so I checked on it and found this. Are you going to finish the other story? I didn't want to start reading again until I was sure. LOL. I'm done with unfinished fics.

This was interesting. In my mind I'm going to think Bella wakes up and they live happily ever after. LOL. I kinda liked this dark Edward. He did what he had to do. Of course I guess it would make it worse when it was your parents you were killing. :P

Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.

I wanted to know what they exactly did to Bella you only hinted at it with the drugging but what else did they do to her?

I like it. It is dark but I like it.

Oh, one very dark hEA but I love it. I'm sorry to hear that you have no intention to expand it. Hopefully you will reconsider it someday because I believe it will be a on hell of a story.
Thanks so much.

I loved it.

Loved this, though how about a follow up where Bella wakes up. Oh, and you forgot to punish Angela.

Sweetie, good job on trying to think outside the box! :)

He got her revenge for her.

Yes it was dark, but I loved it.
Remind me never to cross Edward.
They sure paid.

Omg! This was really good.
I think I need to re-read though.
I missed why she was in the hospital.
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