Oh God, that's a really beautiful story! You have such a huge gift in writing! I love every line of it! Thanks a lot for your time and energy! It brighten my days! And you're really great in M-rated stuff)) I've had a great buzz!

Thank you for the ride. It was great story and an even more great ending.

im loving every moment of this chapter and it will be quite a surprise if they dont consumate the relationship because it is the right tme and the right moment. Everything is perfectly romantic. There's no way it's not gonna happen.

awww... that was very sad. The misunderstanding- Andy thought it was what she wanted to hear.

i was laughing hard at your warning "there is light at the end of the tunnel" lol you want to appease everybody lest they think you were making a sad ending by breaking them up.

great chapter! The sister conversation... Sharon admitting her feelings. Rusty explaining the obvious.

oh brother! i can just throttle Sharon.

You really have a knack for romantic moments. I wish i can come up with those. hehe That constellation moment was perfect and the Dodger memory with Sharon was just ultimately sweet.

That lunch break was soooo romantic.. Wish Andy reassured Sharon he had eyes only for her

i like your idea about the game wherein the winner gets to ask question. that was a romantic moment at the bowling alley

I am hurting too. no... this cant be right... i hope andy wil assert that it's sharon he wants.

oh no... my heart is breaking. i wish And didn't give his number when Abby asked for it. It will be an indication he is not interested. Please please dont let Andy like her (seeing Sharon in her)

nice to visually read exactly what's going in the minds of our beloved characters especialy Sharon since she always appears to be composed. You hit the nail in describing her feelings for Andy. Enjoyable read.

pretty great circumstances you have created. i believe the audience woukd have seen the transitiin from "not dating" to "dating" if there was simething like this that would have Sharon quickly move their relatiinship to the next level.

and of course it would be cute to see her hiding her jealousy or worry over another girl snagging Andy Flynn's heart.

Your characterization of them in yiur story encapsulates their characters and circumstances in the show... well done.

I love love love the story and your writing. I started reading and couldn't stop till i read it all. Even so i missed out on sleep it was more than worth it. Thank you so much for writing

I have read this twice ... i think its been a while... may need to read it again... i particularly like the massage bit and them dancing. Love this story