God awful confusing mess not worth a read

If it’s abandoned the it is not complete

When you mentioned that you see Elohim and Lucifer as old buddies, for some reason it reminded me of the book Good Omens, written by Terry Pratchett and Neil Gaiman. If you have never read it, you should.

Thank you for letting us know :)

Thanks for letting us know, sorry to hear about your rocky friendship, I know that sucks.

Not to nag or anything but Neville was suppose to be 8 when send back according to previous chapters...

But love the story so far! I love that it goes completly in another direction and I just love playing around with demons and angels... uhh, metaphorically speaking;

REDRUM! REDRUM! Caught ya!

Honestly? I've seen Luna be the Devil in a One-Shot and I could easily see her being Lucifer's daughter for real especially seeing just how patient she could be in getting her revenge. Evil Luna is awesome and isn't something done often enough. Evil Luna who Time Travels is a first though. I could also see Luna being a Time Lady from Doctor Who considering how intelligent and whimsical she is.

Are you going to stay with Harry after this for the 2 years before Neville comes back before switching between Harry and Neville for 3 years until Luna arrives? it would make things simpler than having you constantly jumping through time.

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i really dont understand why you are putting so much emphasis on the divine in the plot. if i wanted to read mythology in this quantity i would have gone to Percy Jackson ffn. there ia so little of harry and co that sadly ive lost interest. it was a really interesting idea but sadly i cant continue. thanks for the fic and all the best with it

A well done chapter. Nicley done with the introduction of new characters to Harry as they will somewhat train him to be better and stronger. It was amusing to read the warning they gave him about his ribs. It was interesting to read about Neville's thoughts as Hermione annoys him and the not being able to get his mind off of the new girl in this timeline. Looks like Prodigy is making his move to different universes and his possible goal of going to each world. He will be quite the force against them when he makes his appearance. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

A well done chapter. The introduction of Marey was quite interesting as she was a mystery herself as Neville couldn't remember her from the other timeline and her comment about Harry might have irked him a bit as well. The visions Harry was seeing was well described and the voice he was hearing was interesting as well. Looks like Harry is having his own problems with the voice in his head. Elohim and Lucifer are having their own problems with one another as well, but Elohim seems to want to reconcile even if the road is long and hard. Ophir was interesting in keeping him in line with her calmness though. Lucifer's fears was quite interesting as well and I wonder what took place in Prodigy's world for him to be like so. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

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When you said Norris I thought you meant the cat. Would be an interesting place for Jesus to be hiding, but Chuck is better than Mrs.