Interesting chapter and plot and idea

to be continued

Hope you continue!

Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Hopefully their relationship will go smoothly after the storm, and hopefully Blue won't be the only raptor for long. Please update soon, can't wait for the next chapter.

Your work is truly inspired! I absolutely love this concept! I can't wait to see how their relationship goes. Is the rest of the island going to find out? How long can they keep it quiet that Dr Alan Grant, "dino disaster veteran" is the father of "The Owen Grady, badass extraordinaire?"

I thought it was a pretty great story, and I do hope you come it when you have the time that is.

This is very interesting having Dr Grant as Owens dad, so please update again soon.

This is a really, really intriguing story so far. I'm very curious to read more about it. Keep it up! :)

It's been two months since your last update! What is going on?! Please update...

I have an incredible need for this to never end. (i'm sorry, that seems kind of unfair to the author, but I REALLY love this) I appreciate that you kept Blue in there - it always seemed a bit unfair that they just kind of...left. You might assume they came back for the dinosaurs, but the movie doesn't show it, so you really don't know. But this is very logical - the dinosaurs still on the island represent trillions of dollars and there were only a few dinosaurs on foot during the whole thing, and the flying dinosaurs. That's a problem, but not too terrible. Plus, most of the action took place in places where there weren't a lot of people. So the indominus only really ate employees, Rexy didn't kill people, and the raptors, again, only ate employees. I guess the flying thingy-ma-bobbers really did the most damage to the public. I also love the Owen you have here. He seems very much in character, and I can't imagine him leaving and never coming back for Blue. I think he would feel guilty. And he is very much the 'Chuck Norris" of Jurassic World. Basically, I loved this story, and I think it's a wonderful idea. I hope it continues!

I like your story so far, thanks!

This story is soo cool. I loved every chapter. Please update as soon as possible

Yay! So glad you updated! Another great chapter, even if now I can't help but dread because I feel like something will happen to Owen... I really thought Alan would stay with him, but I guess he didn't want to be to pushy, not when Owen was like “I can manage! I'm a big and responsive adult!”. I'll wait the next chapter to see if Alan was right about his foreboding... Still, I'm hoping for some father/son bonding in the next chapters

Great new chapter! :D

Whoo, now I've got a bad feeling about the future too... more specifically, the future if I don't get more of this awesome story! Please keep going! Please please please!