I like this one. It's nice to see a story where harry is not a fragile character that needs everyone to save him, but he is a character that is proactive in the story.

Harry/Alice would be the most realistic but Harry/Alice/Bella would be hot as well :)
Update is all u have to do tho!

Love this please update soon
-SL xxx

This is awesome. I'm not certain how old you're going to make him, but the way you started off and the subtle use of his knowledge is great. Really hoping to see this continue on. Plus I like the future pairing

Interesting story idea!

A great start, I would vote Bella and Harry stays sisters. I am for a pure Alice x Harry. Secondly I would love to see this more progressed.

interesting so far but I'd hope it become a Harry and Bella and Alice story

Nice start, defiantly think you should go harry/Alice. Any chance of an update anytime soon?

This is really good looking forward to more. I think the Harry/Alice pairing would work best in this. Thanks for sharing

carry on. I like this story

Harry/Alice/Bella for the pairing.

Good start. Hopefully you stick to Harry/Alice and not include Bella.

I hope you update soon, your off to an interesting start

Harry/Alice is more intriguing because of Alice's somewhat surprisingly complex personality, considering how the whole Twilight series is a Mary Sue one after the other... And Bella is too shallow to be a proper partner for Harry, she is too superficial and naive. Keep up

harry/Alice/Bella would be good.
I don't see Bella getting back with Edward, but her and harry can have a connection.
I know the chapter said she saw harry as a sort of older brother, but I can see her dealing with everything with Harry's help.
hope you don't go to long without updates.
though I would rather wait for a long chapter, than get quick updates that are short.