| Reviews for Mango |
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Skovko chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 Even more cute than the first one. |
ilzehs chapter 1 . 8/1/2016 Ambreign smut at its finest with Daddy kink satisfaction...FUCKKK SOO GOOD AND HOOTTT! Baby Boy Dean and Daddy Reigns is the best Ambreigns ever and this was gloriously hot and beautiful. There is nothing hotter than Dean being played with so beautifully and Roman being such a hot piece of meat! |
Zanderlover chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 Aw,what a sweet story. I don't usually read many slash stories ( even though I love Ambreigns ) ,but this one just drew me in and just goes to prove it almost doesn't matter who is in the story if it's not your cup of tea,but it's the feeling and the emotions behind the story that counts and can make a believer out of someone if you see what I mean? You have a very easy going free flowing way with words...like you are painting a beautiful picture. I can see both of them acting exactly as you wrote them. Just goes to prove what a wonderful writer you are and how you just draw people into your story. I think you did a really stupendous job of being true to both of the characters and capturing their voices and essence. You seem to have a real talent and flair for writing and the story seems to flow easily and naturally...nothing seems rushed or forced. Dean and Roman seem like polar opposites and on paper don't look like they would go together but I think inside they are more alike then people think and they just fit like peanut butter and jelly! LOL! You write so eloquently and everything is so easy to picture that I feel like your images spring to life before me and are playing out right before my eyes. I especially like how you wrote Dean. I like seeing different sides to him because that's how he is in real life. No one is just one way all the time. Love how he is cocky and brash and bold one minute with Roman and the next he is almost shy and hesitant and soft. The way you write Dean is so beautiful. Rough and tough on the outside who pretends he doesn't need anyone but inside there still lives that scared little boy just hoping someone will want to love him. Roman was very much in character in this as well. I always picture him as the protector and so very genuine. Strong,but with his own worries and insecurities. Sweet how Roman had feelings for Dean all along. Your writing is fresh, clean,and simple. I wish I had that gift. Sometimes I fear that I " flower " my own stories too much and add too many details so what I am trying to say actually gets lost. Yours is very easy to read and I wish you would have written more on this because it would have been a pleasure to watch Dean and Roman's relationship grow and progress. This was just so beautifully written that I felt like I was IN the room with Dean and Roman and I was embarrassed to eavesdrop on such an intimate conversation and act with them. The love you made me feel that existed between Dean and Roman was so palpable and real to me that it was almost like it was another character in your story. Now THAT is what I call writing! Like I said,I would love to have your gift for my very own fics! You are the type of wonderful writer that I wished took requests! I bet your incredible writing could bring some good ideas to wonderful life! Again, great story and sorry for the lengthy review! I tend to get a little verbose if I really like something and have the time to really "go to town" with a review! ;-) I've been having some rough times so it was so very nice to stumble upon a fic of this quality since it helped bring a smile to my face. :-) Keep up the good work! |
CrazyCollectionDuck chapter 1 . 9/4/2015 Haha you make me laugh, but it's so true. That was a great story; awesome job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 It's not just the tip...especially when you wanna desperately feel someone, like Dean and Roman needed to feel each other. That was so damn sexy. Loved it |
stingerette1975 chapter 1 . 7/3/2015 Lol! Awesome! I know as there so this was the imagine I imagined when they gave that answer too! |
Minusmelle13 chapter 1 . 6/29/2015 Babe did i mention how much i love you? Ugh you write so good. Still waiting for the full length fics. Babes you write way better than i, and shouldn't deprive us of your greatness forever. |
ageofambreigns chapter 1 . 6/29/2015 Great sequel. Was really looking forward to it and you didn't disappoint! Lol good job :) |
Teryl1179 chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 I won't be looking at my mango scented shower gel the same way anymore... Just the tip... yeah, as if this ever works. Especially when you're in love and want the other one so badly. This was amazing, I like how Roman is always able to ground Dean and make him stop running. Great story :) |
Suicide Emo chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 Love it |
roman fan chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 Oh wow that was hot and soft and passionate and just holy hell all at the same time. Poor dean talk about trust issues. But roman was, well roman. Strong and gentle and sensitive. Not letting dean run or feel alone. But seriously, so worth the wait. Just wow. Loved it |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 Yeah its never just the tip..I love Ambreigns and you just write them so smut was like it |
Sparkles Blue chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 Just for the record I can totally see Dean grabbing Roman's ass in public and then acting innocent. Dean killed me with " Just the tip." Huh uh. But that dick felt good didn't it. I don't know why he was playing. He knew that he wanted that dick badly. I love Ambreigns, I do. I like how you write them. |
HardyKat chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 Holy shit! The A/C is needed post haste. Good job with the storytelling and the visuals! |
GatesVengeance chapter 1 . 6/28/2015 ahhh. these boys! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and the sex scene was heaven! Silly boys though playing 'just the tip', it's never ever the tip. idiots. I don't know how I'll end up looking at Mangos the same way ever again haha and the chemistry that you gave them over the both parts was fantastic. You can tell that they both cared deeply for each other. |