The plot thickens. It's nice to see Red again. I'm looking forward to John and Tonto's first run-in with Benson. Hope Anida stays safe.

If I may offer some advice, this story could use a little extra polishing to make it really shine. Be sure to capitalize proper names, like John, Tonto, Red and Anida. Also, don't forget punctuation in dialogue. For example: "Alright," said Anida. They might seem like little things, but it makes a story easier to read.

I hope you will continue this. Looking forward to more. :-)

Good start. This promises to be a fun story. You nailed the humor between John and Tonto. The girl asking if John was a raccoon gave me a good laugh.

Please keep writing this story
It's good and it's short and makes sense
So please keep writing
Sincerely~ Lexy

So cool I love it hope you can up date soon