I really love this series

Love this story!

Yeah...coffee on West Ogden? Not...recommended. Gotta love fan fiction writers and their lack of research. Their is only one writer who gets it right and she'd be pissed if I dropped her name.

Great chapter and confrontation scene with Peter. So glad Tris held her own with Peter and then headed off to Tobias afterward...(sigh)

Love your writing and how well you set up your stories. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series.

My first thought at the end was...oh, Crap! We don't get to read about them. Then I remembered that you there was another part to this story! :-D

No contest between Tobias and Peter! If I was her, I would be breaking it off with worthless Peter immediately! ;-)

I loved this start. I especially liked how you seamlessly weaved in so much of their past, their interests and their personality. In one chapter we have well developed characters. I also like when grown people act like grown people and express their interests in each other.

I like this reality or 'universe' you've created and the way you've kind of made these characters your own. The disjointed glimpses you give us into their lives feel authentic and relatable thus making your characters more tangible. You've maintained a good balance of the fluff and (often times darker) reality that make up relationships in the real world.

IDK how far you plan on expanding this series... I hope to see more of it ... because there's ALOT of potential to develop these characters and there connection.

Pls pls pls pls update!

I have to say thank you! After reading two less-than-uplifting chapters from two stories I'm following, I *really* needed some fluff. So glad to have found your stories!

I like your Lauren too. My question is which Pedrad does he work with?

Peter was an absolute JERK! Glad she left him!

You know somehow I started in the middle of this story! I'm glad I decided to take the time and see how it starts!

Like I told you on the last one I reviewed, I love your Christina! Everyone needs a friend like that!

Aww please update soon! FOURTRIS!

This was fantastic! I, for one, wouldn't mind reading more from this universe you created if you were to expand it. I actually just read the other stories you wrote. They are all great and well-written. Keep up the good work!