I love to see a short piece about Voldemort in the dale

How does a horned owl pick up a snake that is big enough to eat a human?

I wonder why Harry didn't get a letter. It's an "Under-17" quidditch league, so he could still play and then go on to other careers after graduation.

Great story,hope to see more from you soon.

Was really enjoying it till this chapter (9). As you said very rushed and jumpy. Why no mention of the 2nd and 3rd tasks? And Tonks got a mention in chapter? then forgotten?
Could have left Harry with either Fleur or Tonks, (Or both!) I love pairing them together... Don't mind H/Hr, but my most hated pair has to be H/G.W. (Shudder). I'd rather pair Harry and Pansy... But, as I said, Its worth a read...

I love this so nice no dumbles no Remus no annoying draco or Ron ya I hate Remus hated how he got with tonks he's such a wimpy ass character

Feels a bit short, and this last chapter feels rushed. I know you said you went over it and couldn't figure out how to expand and I agree but it still feels rushed, maybe too much info dumped at once?

An interesting challenge, could be homey like this or brutal and gory like most wish demon wishes turn out. Regardless, thanks for the story it was quaint and likable.

Good story.. Thanks..

Cute story

A very satisfying story.. Thank you for sharing

That was an amusing story.

Even though I am a Harmony shipper I enjoyed this story. Thanks so much

Logic according to Spock.

Logic is a wreathe of pretty flowers that smell bad.

Logic is tweeting bird chirping in the meadow.