| Reviews for Rules of a Melon |
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SWDarkstone chapter 1 . 9/6/2019 I really liked this. A lot. It was simple, but honest about what it was. This little gem of writing didn't try to win me over with action or romance, it didn't care if I ever read it. Yet this story, which was recommended to me by the way, took me quite easily and fully through all the steps for the ending to matter and yes make sense. Bravo and bravo again I say! |
Adro-Sama chapter 1 . 4/27/2019 I like this |
ARega1s chapter 1 . 1/29/2019 A lovely and cute little one shot. Wish there were other good RonxBon stories out there |
alexscott656 chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 This i Beautiful |
quijibo7609 chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 This is sweet. It might work a bit better if you expanded certain scenarios a bit more. Not a lot but a couple of bits. Maybe be a bit less complimentary to Ron at the very start. Of course, maybe I'm just not getting some set-ups because I know so little about the show. Yeah I've never seen an episode, sorry. I came here through a link in discord. So, despite my grosss ignorance, let me just state, you sell Bonnie as top bitch quite well and succintly. You also set up Ron as fundamentally decent, if a bit oblivious, equally well. And I think that, more than anything, was what you were going for. So we'll done. |
Tie-dyed Trickster chapter 1 . 8/24/2018 This was a neat look at Bonnie and Ron, and felt like a fun exploration of how a relationship between them might happen. |
duskrider chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 Rather interesting story I really like the pairing as it is cute in its own way. |
JohnnyHandsome chapter 1 . 3/16/2018 I gotta say This is one Of the Best Ron Bon story's I've read in my opinion you should actually make A Full Fledged Story outta of this it's pretty great unlike my Ron Bon StoryV |
Mallobaude chapter 1 . 2/28/2018 Persistence paid off there for Ron. Despite the food chain, despite Bonnie's rivalry with Kim, Ron is still a good friend. The kind that Bonnie needs. One who would never betray her because he's not a part of her social circle. Well done. |
Kifo Sotri chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 I loved reading this. The way you developed the RonBon was adorable and completely in character for them, and I would hope that you'll make more of these two in the future. |
Outcast's redeemer chapter 1 . 5/12/2017 You should do a rules story for Jaunt and the entirety of Beacon's female population. That would be epic. Like you said the two blond fools are basically the same guy |
burning-hate-an-love chapter 1 . 3/5/2017 I love this story it is so funny I just absolutely love it |
dlobman chapter 1 . 7/18/2016 Absolutely Badical. |
The Struggling Warrior chapter 1 . 6/2/2016 This was fun. I really enjoyed it and kind of want to see more of the times that Bonnie let Ron break the rules. Even the ones after 100. Thank you for the story. |
Mahler Avatar chapter 1 . 5/11/2016 Wow. A REALLY good RonBon fic, with not only Ron and Bonnie acting in character, but the ever so slow but quite steady Bon Bon character development, ending with the inevitable. I had to look up 'tsundere' but it fits beautifully. A true gem. MA |