read it and all i can say is mediocore

For some reason I hate kakashi

Hard banana. I have such a dirty mind.

I loved the story right up until the ending ...then it got confusing...and mildly anticlimactic/cliffhanger-y. Very well written though! Keep up the good work!

ok... I like the idea of your story...but this chick is extream! Her first thought of someone cutting her hair is to smash her fist into the wall, hard enough to break the wall. If she was normal.l ike she thought she was, she would have broken her hand. Next when confronted by something really weird is to smash her head into a wall... And she wanted to be a doctor? She has horrible temper and self-harm issues! Maybe the next few chapters her character will smoothen out since right now her actions seem forced. And she makes a comment about a crazy brother but given she tried breaking her hand then her head. She seems pretty crazy as well, not in the fun way either.

What.

What

Whet even~ Aww I like the little outtakes!

*cackles* no curse seal~ Oh poor Sazu

Yeeeees. They got him?! Save Sasuke?! Oooh foxy bonding

I hope they're okay. Yaaay~ part two!

Interesting side story

Awwwww 'Tachi. Hehe Sasuke

Huh I hope they made it home okay. *growls* Gato. He stays? :D Stay away Danzo~ Why is he so yellow? Is he wearing yellow orrrr...? I like seeing things from Jeraru's POV :D Yaaay~ He's genuine! So he could see once? Emo! :D "The apples! They've come to get me!" XD XD XD

I love the bonus and kinda want a continuation . Did they die? Awwww Inner :) Bam *Sokka voice* Uchiha Clan~ Yeah!