elite jounin didn't know that ninja were disguised as bandits? do you know that ninja of his calibre can sense chakra no problem?

Love your story! I hope you update soon Please ignore some stupid reviews that are ENTIRELY wrong, and keep doing what you’re doing. They’re just invalid words from invalid people. It’s your story, you do whatever you wanna do with it, and if they don’t like, well too bad for them for not seeing it for what it is truly; a great story with a great plot. Hope you have a lovely day!

Please update

nice story , plz continue

I don’t usually take the time to write review but I wanted to reassure you that you‘re story is well written. I was scrolling through the reviews and saw some really offensive things. I really hope you don’t take them to heart. They have no idea what they are saying. They are entirely at fault. You did no wrong at all. I hope you power through

Ok story is literally shit! pure shit! what the fuck did you take Naruto one the great shonen anime/manga and turned it into? Why did you do this? This is fucking a drama anime now. What the fuck?

If people wanted drama then they would fucking go watch K-drama and sop-opera... we come to Naruto for the action and the mysticism of chakra and pulling fire balls out people's ass and here you are feeding us Literal shit drama and trying to pass it off by using Naruto as it's setting.

"Natsuki is a flawed protagonist"
Natsuki is shit. She can't ever be a protagonist.

Fun, can’t wait to see more!

Will Natsuki learn to combine water realease with bojutsu like Asuma did with his chakra blades to create a elemental bojutsu style?

I really really love the way you describe Shisui I imagine this tiny 7 year old who is just a small teddy bear.

I think the author should commit suicide. Your novel sucks. It is just the same just like the manga, albeot with an inserted original character and that's all. You suck! So you should stop writing before your IDIOTIC mind can create another good or better story than this. STOP BEING SO STUPID CREATING EMOTIONAL STUPID MC LIKE YOU. COMMIT SUICIDE!

Nothing happening for 12 chapters : check.
MC training and still being terrible at everything despite being reincarnated and having good genes : check.
Shitty explanation about why she can’t use chakra : check.

I’m sorry, but... this is just a waste of time. A fiction can be bad if the story, universe and characters make no sense. It can also be bad if nothing is happening. You didn’t take any risk whatsoever while writing this, thus, this entire FF is very bland. It feels like I’ve read this exact story dozens of times, now.

In any case, good luck with what comes next.

Loved it!

Aw I wanted her to be on a team with Guy. Oh well.
Also, is she ever going to stop thinking that everything will be exactly canon unless she purposefully changes it?
She thinks Rin and Obito are walking corpses, is so convinced Shisui has his death scene thing, despite her interacting with them heavily etc.
Does she thinks she is a god? She hasn't willed something to change therefore it won't?

Or is that how your story is going to work?

Her and Kurenai being nervous is silly af imo.
I view it like the Chunin exams first part from canon, Ibiki psyching them out about if they aren't willing to risk it all we don't want them as a Chunin. This is no different, if you panic at a fucking exam like this, if you don't think your ready, then we don't want you as a genin, and you should fail.
Hell, you should be mature enough to accept that if you are that nervous, you aren't ready to graduate, and so shouldn't take the exam. You can't keep calm at the thought of a school examthe fuck kind of business do you have going out and fighting for your lifefor your comrade's life?