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Guest chapter 1 . 7/13 Can't seem to login as me...so I'm mumphie. Liked your story. Hope there is more! Wish Harry could find a loving guardian, wish it had been Sirius and Remus, but - oh well, it is your story as you want it to be. So, keep your muse happy! |
GenieM chapter 1 . 6/3 Very much liked! Thank you |
gabzep chapter 1 . 4/22 Wow Sirius really lost it |
Calmzone1 chapter 1 . 4/2 So, why were Severus, Sirius and Remus not tested for spells and potions? Interesting story. |
gginsc chapter 1 . 3/19 Great job! Love the way Harry get on with his life. Hate the name Dudley. I mean, really? After the Dursleys'? |
mithrilandtj chapter 1 . 1/13 Sirius is an idiot |
ripper34 chapter 1 . 1/7 Good story |
jbfritz chapter 1 . 12/24/2019 Great story! |
hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 11/30/2019 Great story, hope to see more from you soon. |
Matt chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 You horribly bad at spelling writer, the word for reading another person's thoughts is Legilimancy. Snape would legilimize James Potter, not legitimize him. Legitimize means something COMPLETELY different. You used a bunch of other words wrong in your story, but that was one of the most egregious examples. |
Matt chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 Since when is Harry's owl named Helwig? In the books, and most fanfics, her name is Hedwig. With a D. And there's no such thing as a potions regiment. The word is regimen. No T on the end. |
Ann Jinn chapter 1 . 8/10/2019 This was a great story. I can't stand Ron and his family either. Glad Hermione understood how emotionally desperate Harry was. Like his educational plans and the tutors. Glad he is getting social help too. Do you plan on following up on the hints how Lily might have been charmed or optioned to be with James? |
Kyr chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 Thanks for sharing. |
12456237-DeleteAccountPlease chapter 1 . 7/27/2019 Look forward to the squeal then. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2019 A fine story. Only to little of hermione even after she was cleared, even if they don't become a couple where is the contact eventually? |