Reviews for Finding Olivia
yingyang90 chapter 6 . 6/11
this is an interesting story...please continue when you can
Guest chapter 6 . 1/23
Please continue this story. I have the story title memorized so I check it month after month to see if their is anything new
Guest chapter 6 . 11/14/2018
Please don't let this be the end. It's one of the best stories I've read
Guest chapter 6 . 9/1/2018
I know it's been awhile since you've updated but I hope you continue this story
kyekye chapter 6 . 2/20/2018
I'm really hoping to see more of this fic come out soon its one of my favs
Guest chapter 6 . 2/9/2018
Desperately waiting for chapter 7 love your fan fiction. Wish the chapters were a little longer
Jenny chapter 6 . 11/26/2017
I really hope you are planning on still updating this story because I really love it.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/9/2017
Please continue soon ... Cant wait for chapter 7
Butterfree chapter 6 . 7/13/2017
Ahh, what an excellent story so far! I absolutely love how willing you are to make Helga so flawed yet relatable at the same time. She's 9, it makes sense that she would have those feelings when running away, and it's amazing that you're taking the approach of her being partly at fault as well. It'll make the gradual escalation of the manipulation all the more heartbreaking.

Similarly, I find it interesting how you went the route that some people are missing Helga while others have yet to feel that way. It's nice to see that you're treating everyone's reaction on the matter so individually. It makes me curious on where the each of them will go as Helga is left missing for a longer period of time. Overall, I'm really enjoying this story so far. Thank you for the read and good luck writing!

~ Queenie
Tiffany0 chapter 6 . 7/11/2017
Can't wait for you to update, I actually love the show Finding Carter, and am interested in seeing where you are taking this story.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/10/2017
I remember reading this back in the day. It is so good, glad you came back to it.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2017
Woahhhh
Nep2unne chapter 6 . 6/9/2017
Helga should of stayed there and listen to the phone call. Shouldn't something be on tv or tbe newspaper with her missing. Please update when you can.
flornoir chapter 6 . 6/9/2017
Oh man, I'm so excited for your upcoming chapters! I feel terrible about being happy I knew it'd be an eventual kidnapping, just because I figured it wouldn't last as long and maybe everyone wouldn't miss Helga and she wouldn't truly miss them too.
Stardazzled8 chapter 6 . 6/8/2017
I love this story so much, I've usually left reviews as a guest, but I decided to log in for once ahaha. Anyways, I really enjoy reading this and I can't wait for the future updates!
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