Love this fic and I hope you pick it back up someday soon!

here is an idea for an ability for Naruto's Sharingan mangekyou it is called kami no jikan kanri or god time control with it naruto can stop time indefinitely he can also to go forward in time and backward in time as much as he wants and yes it is completely overpowered and original I believe.

In another Naruto Uchiha fanfiction, Fire and Blood, the ancestral Uchiha sword all the way from Indra Uchiha. The first Uchiha Patriarch’s sword called Dawn. It was furthermore pasted down throughout Uchiha generations, and to Naruto in that story. So some sort of Sword, maybe ancestral to the Uzumaki or Uchiha from Madara?

And here's where I drop this. You need to get your mind examined. I think you will turn into a serial rapist or murderer in the future.

Why did you kill bee? As I was reading this, and judging so far by what i read, you killed most of the characters you have an absolute disdain for, such as the third hokage, fugaku, and sasuke because of their actions made in the anime. I didn't get why you killed off bee, considering he's one of the more likable characters in the anime. He helped naruto in trying to control kurama, and I could at least list a few more actions that have helped naruto. I would like to know why you killed him, or if this is just to further enhance and move the plot. Perhaps you could revive bee in the future?

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Seems you like children a little too much. Kill yourself. Seriously. I'm actually considering you being dead will be better for fanfiction if this many cliches are still out and about. Just another shitty story from a shitty mind incapable of any useful progress.

"Kushina-chan, do you know how long the Uzumaki clan has loved ramen? Long enough for it to become a bloodline! RAMEN JUTSU!" A bowl of ramen appeared in Naruto's hand, to Kushina's amazement.

It’s an alright lemon. Could have gone into some details with how he kept doing her and some emotional stuff but oh well.

For a person that seems to have some brain matter from what was shown in first couple of chapters the MC had made glaring mistakes further into the plot. He was in foreign and enemy territory (Konoha), he had knowledge of betrayal and evilnes of the highest figures yet he left his potential love interest with no protection. That is not something a person having many means to project his power would do. He could leave some clones with Kushina and that whole drama would not come to pass. He could use some clones with stealth skills to spy on every one upon being in konoha. FOr a supposedly intelligent ninja he was behaving like a moron.

I. Am. Never coming to your profile to look for stories.. Every again... By far too disgusting, bland, tiring, lame and overdone. And seriously lacking a shitload of logic. I'm not surprised that I was told not to go to this profile...

Ew. Kill yourself.

update soon plz

Naruto-DRAGONS! Kushina-Phoenix Mikoto- i dunno

DRAGONS!