Roxas x Xion in case you bring her here

Wish u would deviate from Canon a little. You changed the journey but they arrive at the same destination, forgive the metaphor

I feel like louise and the other nobles are ooc, they were mean to the commoners but not to the point of killing them. Pretty sure guiche became a redeemable character and companiondidnt he?

Please update

This is amazing the way you write a story is very moving i hope you continue this fanfic someday soon

This is amazing we want more please update

While I don't really have problem with you bringing back Wales, I have more problem with how there's no real consequences with how you bring him back and how Henrietta act for that. Also just because Roxas is Sora's Nobody doesn't mean his personality is exactly the same. He may have some of Sora's antic but not all since he also experience some thing that Sora's didn't (Whole Organization XIII missions in his own games) so while he will forgive Henrietta since he probably very understand what the deal is, him forgive her that fast is kinda odd to say. But well that's just my view and probably you would told me don't like don't read

Hmm... I guess this is where I back off from reading. Pretty well written, and I honestly can't remember any spelling errors or the like popping up. Unfortunately for me, I don't like reading crossovers with romance very often, if at all. So hard to find to find FoZ fics without a pairing, haha.

Again thou, good fix! Just not my genre.

How dare you not have Sora and Riku tell Roxas that Axel is alive (I’m joking but that should have happened... unless it happens in a future chapter). Axel would have popped out a corridor of darkness, said something witty and perhaps breaking the fourth wall while he was at it, and then have a happy reunion with Roxas!

This Fan fic is dead because all of you guys want your own way. It's his/her story and they can do whatever they want with it. Almost all of you are complaining that he/she just killed the plot or ruin this person growth of a character, or hell bringing back a character that was dead in the original! For fuck sakes stop all complaining about how he/she could have done it. I stop by this person fic and give him/her my thoughts on it. I either say hey nice fic or I never expected you will take that approach, that's there own story. I even gave them a small advice on certain characters or an idea they might use but I let them decide if they want to use it or not l. All you people just whine and complain about everything without even giving a thought about the writer's own feelings and motivation. So congratulations for killing a writers motivation on a story I like reading time to time. You all know how to kill a writers own story by unnecessary complaining and forcing him he/she should have done this than that. Hope you all happy about it. Also I will remove your P.M message to me if your gonna talk trash about it.

i'm hoping the pairing is either harem or tabitha.

Hmmm... the nobles are unnecessarily inhuman to me. I know they were complete bitches in the original work, but I'm pretty sure they won't go as far as killing a maid considering the fact it would have great political ramifications if a person of noble blood is nothing more than a killer.

Sincerely hope to see this story continue!

one of my pet peeves are people who call out attacks like a douche. you know that they DONT do that in the game right? we are all REALLY impressed that you know its called strike raid but please dont do that.

there you have it. most of the characters in this story are worthless psychopaths