A great one-shot here!

videl hissing saying to sayianman gohan gohan gohan what am i going to do with you don't you get it by now i love you i have been in love with you since that day i saw you in super sayian form outside the bank i knew it was you by your clothes and what was my demi sayian thinking wearing that outfit and during those martial arts moves by the way keep wearing those baggy clothes i would hate to put all the girls at our school in the hospertialn because they started to flirt with my son gohan

videl saying to gohan i love you too my demi sayianman

J'aime beaucoup c'est très simple.

Beautiful! This needs to be set in a full blown story if it hasn't been done yet. I love the way you write and the way Gohan speaks and everything about this.

Awww 3

This is good. It can be an intro for a story.

Cute story love it

Gohan! How could you forget your best friend!?

I liked it, however Goku was a finalist in the twenty-first and twenty-second tournaments and champion of the twenty-third.

Is this a one shot? I think this is one of the best introductions to a story that could span a few dozen chapters. One of a small amount of stories that I could read without having to correct as I went. I hope you could please continue it. And if you don't... Your choice.

beautiful

This was really good but you got the tournaments wrong Goku was a finalist in 21st and 22nd then won the 23rd.

I sure hope it is nt a one shot
Plz update and continue