omg that was so intense! of course Zoro dominates y Nami likes it! great reading while waiting for my appointment with my Doctor hehe I'm not even ashamed!

Holy hell! That was amazing. The odd tense shift wasn't enough to put me off, but it was momentarily jarring.

I love it! AMAZING!

Welp, that was intense. Good. Very good. Cold shower good. LOL

I love this so much.

You did a great job on the characterizations of both Nami and Zoro.

Wildly entertaining ;)

Wonderful PWP one-shot. You did well with keeping them in character throughout every interaction. Some tense confusion, and I would recommend avoiding beaches in future PWP writings; sand is no ones' friend during a late night romp ;) hope to see you writing more ZoNa fics!

Great one shot. The tense got a little switched up but I still enjoyed the story a lot. Would love to read another story :)

Hotness! Nice work keeping them in character as well, although it would read easier if you'd written the story in either past tense or present, (I prefer past) instead of both. Thanks for sharing!

I love it. I hope for more Zona stories.

In a rank of 1 to 10, this is 100. Soo good !
Waiting for the next one ;)

I love it! I think is in character for both of them and I agree with the girls in the bar (and Nami): Zoro is so handsome! Thank you for share this fic with us!

Take care...

Good one-shot.
The plot is overused for these two, but you handled it better than most writers do.
The only bad thing about this fic, is that at some point you changed the verb tense from past to present and then back to past. It can be confusing.