Final Fantasy 7 and the HP/FMA stories please. I’m impartial about the last story. I do hope you continue Broken Timeline though.

The messages you're passing through this fanfic are meaningful, profound, and eye-opening on many levels. Truly, with the skillful way you're writing everything out, I can't understand why there are so few reviews and favs to back up your talent. This is a story that needs to be read by anyone with emotional issues - and I'm glad I chose to read it, as it helped me realize a few things about myself as the characters evolved. I'm definitely putting this one in my favs, and not just for entertainment purposes, either.

Thank you for writing and publishing this story. You've put alot of thought into this, and it shows!

letting go of the past, the future, the physical world, and letting our souls guide us?"

... that's deep. something to think about. yep yugi no one can just do the way you do

omg kinky kaiba and yugi gonna be kinky... death t kinky...

fk i just watched the ceremonial duel and im gonna use ur fic to soothe the cracks in my soul.

Hi, just finished reading this Story, and it was great. I'd realy like it if you would write a sequel. Maybe somthing about Atem, his father, and the others from ancient egypt coming from the afterlife to help Yugi and his friends solfing a crisis. Kaiba said himself they may need to hunt down other lizard people after a while. Or it could be somethig else entirely. The Egyptians in the future: theres all kinds of funny scenes to imagine. Also the relationship between Yugi and Kiba could be given more depth. And may be an encounter between Yugis adoptive father Abnankanon and his real father? After all, we still don't know what he actualy did to Yugi. You're a great writer, I hope to read more Storys of you in the future.

Needs more rewiews!
The end was a bit fast and we dont really know what happened with the lizard-people or if yuugi and Atem meet again in the Spirit realm but this Story is so amazingly good, i really hope there will be other stories even half as good out there. I want to read them all!

Omg I loved this story! It was so good, I couldn't get enough!

the end here felt a little rushed. So first, last chapter.. holy cow are those two bad ass. That was cool. Also i liked the reunion of atem and set at the end, that was cute. But i actually didn't think that the ending with yugi and seto worked very well as much as i wanted it to happen. It felt... forced? Mostly i think it is just really hard in that amount of space to show what seto is feeling or thinking, especially since there was no sign of it happening before in the week they were together. But overall i really enjoyed the story and think it was well written. 8/10 would recommend.

*small cough, snicker* Yugi is by no means innocent. That will be an interesting night. I see this is complete, but what's up? Were the upper lizard-people killed?

*hums* That was quick.

I think that's you should make an sequel of this story. It's an great story. It's going to be an good thing after all.

Ohhh, yugi and kaiba working together... though i don't quite understand kaiba's decision to believe and help yugi... perhaps because I'm used to 4kids kaiba? You've covered all your bases so far so I'm guessing it'll be explained later... I'm suspecting kaiba might like yugi too? Just from that conversation in the bed... anyway definitely still enjoying the story and curious about what happens next!

... I almost started crying with Yugi. This isn't going to be fun for him.

*crying silently* Oh... why do they have to be separated again?