This was just such an adorable fluffy one-shot. Ugh, so much warm fuzzy feelings running through me lol! The zoo part had me in tears, and the ending was perfect :). Now... the real question is: how in the world did the proposal go?! LOL

AHHHHHHHH ... This ending just gets me. It's just so sweet and after all the build-up, it's just - absolutely perfect. I can't say I'm one much for weddings and wedding planning, but gosh I love these kids and the way you write them. And just. omg. Yasuhara. and Masako. Je t'aime Masakooooooooooooooo, how I adore thee! How you manage to keep the cast in perfect character and yet overflow the snark and hilarity, it's so clever. And pull on my heart strings with masterful skill at the same time. How do you do it? I can't pick a favourite part because I love it all so much. Alaska, 37 children, the zoo... ahhhhhhhahahahahhaaha :3 :3 :3 And just the way Mai and Naru's relationship is just so real and tangible and the palpable understanding and respect they have for each other. Brilliantly written, I say! I'll try not to spill all over the floor with all this gushing. Thank you for sharing this marvelous story!

gosh the zoo hahahahahahaha

omg the monkey exhibition part is the best! i think i may have scared ppl bc you've just made me howled in laughter LOL

Awwwwwww Naru Maiiiiiiiii *lots of emotional squealing*
Naru kissing her forehead is the best image ever! Also I thought they were teaching her bed room tricks for the bachelorette party xD
Also, I can't tell you enough. How much I love your story, I mean :D

I really liked this!

This was such an adorable giggle fest! I lost it at "made of honor" and the monkey exhibit, though. Those were classic. XD XD XD

beautifully written.

This is so so lovely (and in character!). I cried TWICE. It's the fluffiness. I can't handle it so well. But oh my god, I love your writing style. So beautiful and simple. I like pretty words, but what really gets me is this kind of writing. I'm so in love with this piece.
(and I'm very interested how the proposal happened... Oh well).
xx carter

This is very cathartic, actually, to read. I will take cheesy romance any day, because I just love Naru and Mai so much I wish that series could have just gone on and on and on. Also, the repartee between the two of them is vibrantly captured by your writing. Really what this boils down to is thank you for being a part of this fandom. 33333

omg, i really loved this, good job on this, it was hilarious and sweet at the same time :)

Everything about this is beautiful XD
Thank you for the read!

What an amazing little fic! You wrote them so well! I am totally in love with it. And Naru's trip to the zoo. lol

Awww! Omg! I loved this to bits! :D

Wow! I haven't been so happy with a Ghost Hunt fanfiction in a really long time! You've really impressed me. The flow of the story was wonderful and the dialogue made me laugh out loud more than once (a feat, I assure you). Everyone was really in-character.

I liked how you didn't actually show the wedding (because that's been done in a lot of fanfics) and it was a great end. The story was very sweet, funny, and apparently well-researched.

Thanks so much for the good read! It has been a while!

-Coriana