Reviews for Sins: The Evil You Create REBOOT |
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Mark the Mark chapter 13 . 4/23 welcome back see you in 2022 :P joking aside nice update. i really wish to see this updated more often though. the mystery of how danny will retaliate with the titans or how the individuals even feel about what happened is... anoyying to wait years for anwsers. like i get starfire wasnt a main part in it. and we have the story from her point of view. but what did Raven feel about what happened? obviously we know malkior was a lie, and im assumeing that storyline was the same as the show. but after it was found out that danny was right, what did she feel like? what did the others? obviously they all kept it quite, knowing they really fucked up. brainwashed starfire into thinking that turning her friends over to the league would do more harm then good. but what else. like i could go on forever with theroies, but i just want to see it happen you know. ravens pov. beast boys pov (jelous of danny?) cyborgs pov (fenton tech vs himself?) robins pov? (jelous on top of being paranoid to hell?) like... i want to see it all haha. also hawkgirl finding all this out and finally meeting new danny would be amazing. hell the supers finding out about the new luther being danny. lol |
vparadox12122000 chapter 13 . 4/8 Well it is an awesome story. You have great character development and great potential in the world expansion or world building. owo Great... um... lemons and reactions lol. Hope you keep up the awesome work in this Excelsior and stuff as well. |
vparadox12122000 chapter 11 . 4/8 ...well dang... great chapter |
vparadox12122000 chapter 5 . 4/8 lol great chapter and also you sick writer saying lol on the lemon... and i loved that moment when i read it muhahahahhaha great jobw") |
Fanreader26 chapter 13 . 4/6 forgot about this story had to re read it still good |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 13 . 4/5 wondered if he would let out that tech |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 12 . 4/5 good chapter very nice setup |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 11 . 4/5 awwww i had hoped he take and use them |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 10 . 4/5 might he try assimilating vlads ghost half |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 9 . 4/5 wonder when the truths going to be released |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 8 . 4/5 huh i thought it would be him dealing with alva |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 6 . 4/5 nice little battle |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 5 . 4/5 good name very intriguing decisions and interactions |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 4 . 4/5 i can see how he would choose that name |
AzureSoulReaper chapter 3 . 4/5 huh i was hoping he would lean more toward a soul reaper from bleach thana poltergist as every thing i ever read about them didn't make seem to strong |