Reviews for My Better Half
QwandriXCI chapter 3 . 10/21/2019
It was so worth staying up till 5 to read this.
Genuinely a masterpiece.
Thank you.
LovelyToMeetYou chapter 3 . 1/10/2019
Oh wow. I have no words. I really loved this. It was so heartwarming, sad and in character. I love how you took the time to show the point of view of many characters and how they changed overtime. I must say Karma’s pov was my favorite. Handling Nagisa’s job and parenting was really interesting and I like how you didn’t make him quit over it. This story felt very real, with lots of obstacles and little joys happening over time, just like in life. This is one of my favorite stories. Thank you so much for writing it.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/28/2018
This is amazing. Thank you so much. I love reading your stories, just, thank you SO much.
Anonymous 4000 chapter 1 . 3/10/2018
This was truly a work of art. The way you developed the story and characters was simply beautiful. Please do write more, because I think I can speak on behalf of all these readers that it would be just as good as this masterpiece right here.
KarmagisaAllTheWay chapter 2 . 3/10/2018
I left a comment on chapter 3 and forgot to say something Lol, I can't wait to see Naoki as a teenager! Gah I'm so excited! It's almost like he's my kid Lol. Oh boy I hope he doesn't fight with his parents... but most teenagers do so guess I can't stop the inedible rip
KarmagisaAllTheWay chapter 3 . 3/10/2018
This is honestly the best fanfiction I've ever read... I've been binge reading this for about 3 days now Lol. It's gonna be hard waiting for the next chapter... But i'll pull through :D It's definitely worth the wait :3
TheKeeperoftheMeow chapter 3 . 12/19/2017
Okay...I LOVED THIS STORY...You did an amazing job, I loved how you wrote Karma and Nagisa and I loved Naoki, he was so adorable.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/11/2017
Loved it, great story!
Deugemia chapter 3 . 8/3/2017
I loved this so very much! The content was thrilling and amazing, the pacing of it all was just fantastic-I didn't feel the need to skip over ANYTHING even despite the thousands of words in one chapter-and I thoroughly enjoyed this! Man, they're impressive parents, despite it being their first kid. Naoki is such a good kid, he took it all at a reasonable standpoint and HE'S NOT EVEN IN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL YET.
Deugemia chapter 2 . 8/3/2017
Their moments of parenthood were absolutely ADORABLE. Naoki is ADORABLE.
Deugemia chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Holy shoot that was amazing to read. I felt so many emotions? Also my face hurts from having this grin on for so long.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/11/2017
This was absolutely bueatiful. The way you brought the characters together, and showed Karmas side was amazing. I loved it when you foreshadowed about there being a monster outside of the window, and when he was trying to break in; wow. I have to say I know what it feels like to be frozen and afraid to move, and you portrayed that with amazing etiquette. Keep writing, it was amazing.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/11/2016
I barely make the time to write a review for a fan fiction but this time I really felt like I needed to. This work is truly truly beautiful. The characters were represented perfectly and I was cativated by chapter 1. It took me 3 days to digest it word for word and boy I couldn't be more please with the writing style and narration. Thank you for spending your time with this because it most certainly payed off.
Kawaiikitten20 chapter 3 . 11/6/2016
AHHH It was so cute! I really liked this, it was a nice take on including a few of the 3-E students and giving Karma and Nagisa a realistic lovers/Parents/Friends relationship. It took a while to read, but by the end it was totally worth it! Loved it :)
Hime-chan Natsumi chapter 2 . 6/12/2016
Uf, realmente amo esta historia. Sus largos capitulos enamoran Aww! El pequeño Naoki. Da ternura. Su reacción por la ausencia de Nagi oh! Y cuando por fin lo vio! Fue tan tierno! A que Nagi y Naoki juntos ambos son lo mas tierno de japón :3 El padre de Nagisa... En el canon, los odio. Pero a la vez los aprecio, gracias a ellos Nagisa es un asesino natural. Naoki será un asesino natural? Es decir su padre es un politico importante y su otro padre es un asesino; hay taleto para aprender
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