Awww, I really wanted more. They’re so cute

Good

WOOHOO I have been waiting for another story with this pairing from you for ages! I loved your previous one, and this one is fantastic too. Great work!

Oo la la! Fun story... it's thanks to you I've become fond of this pairing. Good luck with your fic clean-up!

Aw, that's sweet. I hope this isn't the end, it's a nice idea but it's cruelty to end it so soon.
Sorry to bring it up but there were a couple of jarring typos, near the end Tifa literally says "Giggling," and Genesis first greets her with "hell", was that meant to be hello?
Anywho, these two are always charming together but poor Tifa has very bad luck with childhood promises. Please let us know if this one will end any better!

Nice work, but the only qualm I have is that it takes six paragraphs to get to the actual meat of the story. Try cutting your narration down and seeing if this flows better. Good job.

That is adorable. I've always been a sucker for soul-mates. I would like to have read more, but it's still nice by itself.

You've been spoiling us with all these little stories today. :)