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awesome OS ! thank you !

I really liked the melancholy hopelessness at the end- or when I say liked, I mean it got me in the gut just like a good angst fic should. I think you have Wilson's voice perfectly, and I liked how we as an audience understand a little bit more about House's situation than our narrator. That touch of dramatic irony really compounded the angst, I think.

Wonderful fic, very well written and touching. Thanks for posting.

Wow. I didn't expect the ending. But I thought you'd write till the visit ended!

oh nice story
loved

I've always loved pain related stories as they often show a more personal side of House, and I love how you did that here. This was gut wrenching in the end; extremely well written. I loved it

Please continue this story! It is too good to already end here! Besides, I love reading stories like this one.

I normally don't like first person narration, but I've enjoyed this! Your portrayal of Wilson's cloudy understanding of House's pain is quite accurate. I'm hoping this isn't actually complete as is indicated - this plot really deserves some resolution.