If you want to disrespect your fans and okay. Leave

Hey look, incredibly stupid.

This is not a "feels trip". There are no "feels". It's just stupid. You've made Videl incredibly stupid, and unbelievably selfish and nasty.

The story was pretty good too, until you decided to do something really stupid. And once you've done that, you've made it the rest of the story pointless, because your readers have lost the trust in you that you wouldn't do anything incredibly stupid.

Like, do you understand how utterly selfish Videl has to be to do something like this? Or has your love of dumb angst overwhelmed your brain and you are too busy crying over this "tragedy" you wrote? Videl suddenly became an utterly despicable and selfish character, whom Gohan should not touch with a 10 foot pole. Now, unless the story is going to be about how Gohan is going to get over her and realize just what a douche she is, and she isn't portrayed as a caricature of a bad and selfish "girlfriend", this story is nonredeemable.

Oh boy. Sounds like you are going to make this story really stupid with the ending of this chapter.

When did Gohan become almost a sexual predator?

Another amazing chapter thank you so much ! But the last one, I am so depressed to not have the end of the fic. I just saw you repost the story Under a new version, hopefully we will have the end of this truly very good story :-)) You really are an amazing writter and I will glady reread again the begining of this fanfic
So finally he fighted the cyborgs again, you have well done for the escape and right about him needed to fight them at full force for not having them wanting to kill him. I was so afraid of Videl runing away when he told her that, I was praying for that not to happen ! LOL
I am going to check after your other story I so much love the way you write :-)
And I hope and pray to be able to read the end of this amazing good story, this is one of the best I have ever read ! Thank you again for all your work !

Hello
First of I would like to thank you for your great fanfic ! Sorry if my English is not so good as it is not my native langage I am french but I will try my best :-))
I always was fan of DBZ and most of all Gogan and Videl. I love so much how he can be so strong and gentle at the same time whereas he have seen so much atrocity, and I do love her fighting spirit so much. After watching DB Super until the end, I was so much depressed of what they have done to my favorite couple and character ... Arghhhh it make me so angry I just want to forget it ! And then I looked for confort on internet and fanfic and happily I find you :-) grin
I really do like the way you write and deepen the character development thank you so much for that ! I read "To see you again" since this weekend and find myself so addicted to it I was still up at 4:00 in the morning because I couldn't stop reading you ! I wanted so badly to see Videl crack down and let Gohan in I just kept reading and reading and praying she will finally open to him. I was sometimes angry with her, wanted to snap at her, LOL, but also understanding why she wants to protect herself also but geez you make me feel in a rollercoaster ! LOL
Just sometimes I find Videl a little too horny and crude for my taste, and I am not prudish (grin) but well I can deal with it ! LOL
I only have one chapter to read now and I already feel like I will be depressed and miserable as there is no end to your story and that is a shame. A so good story should have an ending it is too bad ! What can you decide to finish it ?
They so much deserve to have a happy ending, even if they go through a lot, Videl finally was open in to him and it makes me so blissful I just kept smiling all the day, LOL
Well perhaps it is for nothing but I just wanted to tell you that and also say to you you are a great writer thank you so much for all your work, I really DO appreciate reading you.
Thank you for all

Your sleep-drunk jaja. And finally! It was worth the wait, even though I said I hated you for separating them in the first place. Also, I caught that complementing yourself through Gohan with your poetry skills jaja.

You're becoming one of my favorite authors on here, thank you for this one. It gave me the feels!

That sequence with the female doctor was great! I felt like it was greatly needed since Gohan is an attractive guy, he must get hit on just as much as Videl.

I love the story so far but the beginning part was beginning to sound redundant imo. It really picked up the end and I am back on board with excitement for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

This is so painfully good to read. You really did good job capturing the emotions in your writing!

I hate you for this lol. But im loving the fic so far!

I just read the ch. 17...I think I should wrote before I read until here but I just can't stand and keep reading, wow. I would like to take a breath first, haha..

And I find Gohan have no scar on his left eye(face), I think that is a mark of future Gohan (and no left arm but it is too pity I would like you to keep his hand) or he will get the scar in the rest of the story, just say :)

And since the growing background Videl is crude in this story, it's interesting and really funny, I never see and think that. And Gohan keep his kind, tender and shy, but boldly and aggressive at the right time, that's great.
And to see how Gohan bitter at the time Videl push him away and just allow the physical relationship, it really hard. Finally to see they become official boygirlfriend I am so happy that. You really wrote very very long before that. I worried about Gohan if finally he will fail again, it's so glad to see them together. And worse than bunnies... This line really makes me laugh, hahaha.
And the relationship of Gohan and Trunks and Bulma is also nice. I like the brotherhood between Gohan and Trunks, and Bulma teased Gohan and Videl it really fun. Therefore I appreciate that the OC in your story, they make the story more enrich. You really writing a great story.

I am looking forward your rewrite version but just take your time :) Tomorrow I think I am going to start to catch up the Innocent Feelings :)))

Thanks for writing ~!

I just read until ch. 6, and this is really awesome!
I usually think when the future Gohan see Videl is so aggressive...since he suffer too much and don't want to miss the chance in his... May be short life...

And the sex part... I really enjoy it. :333 really hot.
I feel the passion but also bitter between them. It's really bitter. May be I need a little break to read other present line fun story you write of them to relax XD And hope you can keep writing this, I know this really take time and spend effort, but really hope can read this whole story.
Reading this I just feel some regret of the future Gohan is to be compensated... :'3

My English isn't very good, please don't mind. :'''3

I don't know why you'd wanna delete your stories and I really hope you don't. You are one of the best writers on this site and i'm sure, both new and previous readers, will always enjoy your content.

I'm sad to see that you've called it quits but wish ya the best of luck in life.

I can only hope that one day you decide to continue or maybe give us an Author's note with a summary on how the rest the story ends.