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winter hamato chapter 16 . 6/1/2019 A wonderful story indeed. |
CelicaChick chapter 16 . 11/21/2016 Well I finally made it to the first story! It all makes sense now! |
Glazier Blue chapter 12 . 11/6/2016 So beautifully written! love it. |
gueeeesssst chapter 16 . 5/27/2016 okay this was soooooo cute I loved this whole story! I don't know why I'm reading all of these stories completely out of order but yet they are all so good ahhh |
Natalie Ryan chapter 16 . 3/10/2016 Do you feel like you are having a stalker here on your stories? Because I feel like stalker when I re-read them for the thousandth time :) |
Natalie Ryan chapter 1 . 2/4/2016 I had to read this chapter again. This was so sweet. I'm loving the way they were meant for each other since they were kids. And I just love to imagine Raph shivering under Leo's touch... Please forgive my mind for going a little offside ;) Just thinking about something... |
Natalie Ryan chapter 15 . 1/30/2016 Have I said how much I love this chapter before? :D I mean the fluffiness in the first part of the chapter when Leo is calling him names on Japanese and then Master Splinter smiling outside the door. It's these small moments I find the pure happiness and the reason why you have to hold on and wait for the right moment when you'll get all that you ever wanted and that's to be with someone that will love you and take care of you for the rest of your life. I hope I find myself a Leo one day (I'm talking Leo 2003 here, because it's the only Leo I've seen and my first crush and platonic love). But I love your Leo either way. And Raph hehe. They go in the package. Just re-reading some of the chapters to feel better because my day is all messed up and I'm so pissed off, going through rough time with my faculty and the people working in it... Hope you are well and that the week went okay. |
BlingThing chapter 7 . 12/30/2015 Hey it's good so far. I can't figure out who Woody and Sadie are though? I watched all of the 2003 series, and the 2012 one so far, and do not recall those two at all. Are they from the comics? |
Guest chapter 16 . 12/10/2015 Sweet story. Leo and Raph are hot together. Antidote. |
CarnivalGhost chapter 5 . 10/4/2015 "You wont suddenly stop being friends with me, will you Donnie?" Donnie pulled him into a side hug. "Never Mikey." Mikey began fidgeting his hands together. "Even when I tell you I spilled a beaker of orange stuff on your desk?" Donnie sighed. ~ Oh my god, I died.. That was so cute. :') |
CarnivalGhost chapter 1 . 10/3/2015 Can I just say how freaking cute little Raph and Leo are before I continue reading? I know I'm a sucker for Turtle Tots, but you did them so well! :) |
flikaroo chapter 16 . 9/27/2015 I've already read this twice and it won't be the last. There are so many good moments in this tale. I adored the banter between Raph and Leo as Raph tried to give Leo a pet/nickname. Heh, nice try Raph. Then Leo is so sneaky, losing the bet to Raph, when he really just wanted to rub it in his face. That chapter of Leo cursing had me laughing out loud, I almost had eggs go up my nose like Mikey did! And the tie in to Leo suffering from the mushrooms, a great extra scene from that episode. This was a brilliant tale! |
Mr.Butters chapter 16 . 7/10/2015 Yay they did it! I'm so happy for them and I'll start reading the next story like right after I post this review (Sorry for not reviewing eailer wasn't home and had no Wi-Fi) You did such a great job on this story LOVE YOU'R WRITING! :D |
yukio87 chapter 16 . 6/30/2015 What I was waiting so much...Leo and Raph took the next step and they did it...AWESOME! I loved how Raph allowed Leo to take him first and how well Leo did it ;) And then they talked a little and then was Raph turned to take Leo...But that part didn't appear here T.T Anyway, Leo and Raph are happy in their family and they accepted this relationship and Mikey and Donnie went for their own relationship with their love. I hope you're thinking in write a sequel of this...one where the boys have a difficulty in their relationship or something bad happens that they end separated them and they have to reunite again after a very long way to do it (just some ideas nothing else) Good luck and take care |
yukio87 chapter 15 . 6/30/2015 I knew Splinter could understand them. I love this guys...really. They're awesome! And I love how they react with each other. How Raph was with Leo al the time and kept vigil until he woke up. |