Lol that was freaking amazing! Good work!

hahaha sooo funny! :D

Omg I died so hard with this revenge! funny concept and great execution! love rebecca's savage personality too! pleasure to read truly

Omg YASSSSSS SO HILARIOUS LOVED IT

this was so fucking hilarious! I'm dying omg

This was so fucking hilarious, the humor was so spot-on! I startled my cat, I laughed so hard!

Holy shit I found this on tumblr and yeeeeessss

Laughed so hard. Definite fave

This was a brilliant idea!... But the execution could have been much better. Petty "revenge" really doesn't fit with Riza's character - at most she would have ultimately rolled her eyes and told Mustang to forget about it. Even Roy's anger was extreme for him. The additional chapter really takes away from the brilliance of the original concept, honestly. It also makes hardly any sense - "How's the view?" is clever in its context; "what goes around" doesn't seem to have anything to do with anything. As a revenge method, it's boring. It's not snappy or witty. It also doesn't fit for Rebecca to be so mad at Havoc - she'd probably find the situation hilarious, and make a mental note to high-five Riza for getting some from Mustang the next time they saw each other. The ending apologies, explanations, etc. really subtract from the intended humor of the story, also. To sum it up, a great idea, but the exaggerated reactions didn't fit the characters, the pacing wasn't great (too rushed in some places, too slow in others), and better as a one-shot. The smut bits were fun, though.

PFFFFHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Honestly, what more needs to be said?

Holy hell. I am laughing so hard that there are actual tears in my eyes. That is COLD. Aw, man, I love Rebecca. She's the best. Poor, cockblocked Havoc. This was perfect.

I am laughing so hard! Oh my GOD. I remember that post on tumblr. Freaking amazing. This is awesome.

awsome story lol

Absolutely fantastic!

Perfect Ending!