Call me kitten and ill bite

My best advice is to at least write out an outline that you can add and subtract to
Figure out where you want to end up first (other than the obvious of happy/sad/ending, whatever the ending may be). Ask yourself, how do you want the main villain to meet his end, etc.
Ask questions of yourself and your story.
Deconstruct it.

Hopefully that helps.
Hope to see a new chapter sometime soon.

Make it in a zelda like style! Keep doing what you are doing. Bring the OniMask into play! Or end the story quickly.

awesome start.

This is an intriguing story and I love how it's taken the turn to revisiting Termina. I like how Link getting to see the people he knew from eight years ago.

You've got yourself a new follower! :)

I believe he made it back to Hyrule too. He fought in some kind of war afterwards, once probably joining Zelda's army at an older age before dying later. To become the Hero's shade he had to loose an eye and gain that snazzy gold armor first, so he definitely made it back to civilization before becoming the Shade in Twilight Princess.

It's so funny that I literally checked the story because there hasn't been any updates and you updated it one minute ago. Anyways I've been waiting for this chapter for like forever because this was this first fanfic I've ever read and I love this story so much. More updates now? I do understand how hard it is to write chapters and actually do stuff in life and balancing those two out so I can wait, just not too long. Also I'm trying to write my first multi chapter story and I'm kinda struggling with making it long enough and also finish my homework and balance like everything so I do feel you. Anyways keep doing what you're doing and please update soon! :)
-Shortie15

Okay. When will this be updated!? This story's too good to be left up in the air like that,ya know...un-updated and all!

Anyway, great story!

Well, I understand their boat pretty well, i'm just as clueless. Also thanks for writing the story i'm excited to see where you are going with this. Also I don't think Tiffan should be MORE powerful than Gannondorf. The thing is Gannondorf is not subtle or cunning with his plans he is very brute. I don't think that some random wizard should have more power than the bearer of the triforce of power, or more wisdom than the bearer of the triforce of wisdom. I think he should be a bit more Cunning than powerful or wise. Just my own 2 cents mind you.

Good eight chapters.

As a fan of Wind Waker, seeing Aryll's demise hurt. I feel like Link right now.

I really love this story! I almost friggin cried at the part with Aryll! Oh my heart!
Please continue this! I haven't read a good Zelda fic in so long! 3

I've created a zelink fanfic community where two authors write "letters" to each other pretending to Link and Zelda. I don't have anyone joining and I was wondering if you might be intrested in joining with a friend of yours. The link is at the bottom.
( community/Zelink-Pen-Pal-Challenge/120250/)

This is a good story. Please continue. Link and Zelda forever.

I really like this so far. Great intro to a story and I like your description of Zelda. Keep it up!