I don't know if you pay any attention to this account anymore, but you write a mean story, y'know?
Honestly! Freakin' every time it gets to me! And I knew you weren't gonna kill anybody off in this book because I think I've got a feel for your writing style (and to be fair you rarely killed off anyone, mostly just threatened to) but dammed if my freaking emotions can tell the difference! Jeez! Here I am getting high-strung at the end of every chapter and freaking out because HOW DARE you threaten these amazing people even though I know that's not actually happening in a dark corner of my mind but I freak out anyway and hold my hands to my mouth to keep me from hyperventa-screaming because you are a freaking AMAZING writer and I KNEW that Jaques being sick was significant and HOW do you do this you're so AWESOME!?
Anyway yeah, so that's what you did to me. I hope you're still writing out there somewhere, I'd love to read anything else you've written, TF2 or not. (speaking of, time to binge-read the last book on your account...)

Wow. You called the Pyro Sky Dragon...

This was my limit, I just couldn't hold it in anymore. Your past two stories were amazing and emotional for me. This one brought a tear to my eye... and the next one that you have written will probably be equally as good, if not better.

After reading part 1 I felt momentarily sad because it was over, then I remembered there were two more parts.

This was hilarious, insane, sad, rage-inducing, and strange, and I loved it.

Good job. Following you just in case you decide to explore this universe again, one day.

You know, just in case.

It always happens to me that when a story is too good, I can't wait to read the next chapter and so I don't review each one separately, and then I feel bad about it because I just NEED to let you know that I loved every chapter of this story. It's been a long while since I've read your other two previous fanfictions, and recently I remembered that I loved reading TF2 fanfictions and I remembered yours and I suddenly wanted to re-read it.

You can't imagine how happy I was when I realized that there was not only one other sequel, but TWO! I was super excited to read this that I've read all three fanfictions non-stop, and they were even BETTER than I remembered! And different... For example, what I remembered the most about the first one (You need to get a head) was the second RED medic, as if he was the protagonist, entering the lunch room and all his new teammates staring at him, and he trying not to care about it. Turns out he was one of the most secondary characters of the story, haha! Like, what? Heh. And when Engineer reads in the newspaper about twins robbing a bank! HAH! That moment confirmed me that it was really worth it to re-read it all.

Now, this third fanfiction... Woah. I've always loved stories about robots, and this one didn't dissapoint me one bit. It was AWESOME. Mostly because I could relate to almost all the characters! And that's remarkable because they have prejudices of each other, and at the same time they are equal! Ugh, I don't really know how to express myself... There was a moment in which I imagined Dell and Hermes arguing with each other once it all ended, telling the same to each other: "Why didn't you tell me earlier?" "Cause you didn't trust me!" "Well, I didn't trust you cause you didn't trust ME." "But I didn't trust you cause you didn't trust me first!" Heh, confusing...

So, yeah. TL;DR: I loved every bit of the three fanfictions I've read made by you. Now, for the fourth one!

PD: I probably forgot to include something that I think it's important/interesting in this review (it always happens to me), but fanfiction doesn't let us edit reviews, so... Eh.

Yay a happy ending (and nobody died ;p)! I'm glad everything turned out so well. Hermes not only got a friend, but a name too!

I liked that you had a bunch of little stories going on in the background that we only saw snippits of (like Sergei and Gerhardt stealing dinosaur bones or Demo Tavish trying to make his own strawberry alcohol). It's good to know the clones have formed their own unique lives, while still getting into trouble!

It's nice that Jacques gets to have a family (did they turn out looking like him or Lawrence? :p). Who knew that all it took to control the crown of thorns population was a bunch of hungry tentaspies?

I was completely fooled by Aquilina, I should've made that name connection at some point, since I look at constellations so often, but you got me! xD

I might draw something from this story, or one of your other ones, sometime. Is it okay to do that?
Thank you again for sharing your stories!

Ahh dramatic chapter! I hope everyone is okay. :U
Tiny Vlad saying "Toss me" reminded me of Gimli from the lord of the rings movie. :3c
I can't believe Gerhardt and Sergei managed to illegally download a dinosaur. XD

Dang it Dell! There /had/ to have been a better way to handle that. :T

Jacques Cousteau right? A naming ;D
I like him, and I like that he and Scoutbot get along well. Does he get visits from other mercs often?

Ah poor Scoutbot, it's hard working with meatbags. And woo Tiny Vlad! That's so cute that Albrecht has lil handholds on his clothes for him.

Good intro! And thanks, now I'm thinking of how the mercs would do if they tried opening a Jurassic Park. XD

as soon as you made that dick joke I thought
"Sniper don't f*ck the cuttlefish (octopus? Squid?) man I stg"

I STG
I've been laughing off and on about this for the past ten minutes okay I'm done

Bye
I'm laughing so hard bYE
DONT F*CK THE FRIGGIN CUTTLEFISH MAN SNIPER GOD FRIGGIN DAMMIT IM LAUGHING
TOO
HARD
I got on your deviant art, and while I wasn't logged in (I haven't used it for at least a year) I will say I am very excited to finally have something I can watch develop as opposed to read in one go)

i literally squealed out loud
CUTTLEFISH ARE UNDERRATED

WOw just...
What a satisfying conclusion. Loose ends were wrapped up well and my favorites didn't die for once! Hooray! I have to say, your work really inspires me! And I'll be so excited if you write more in this AU! If you do, I hope the next story has lots of dinosaurs!

All in all, this is really well written. Balancing such a massive amount of characters was really well done. Everyone had their own parts to play, and you still kept focus and the true main characers, while tying together other characters and their motivations! Awesome.