| Reviews for Mere Dushman Mere Bhai |
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Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2015 Yaar ye galat baat he (bha bha) hat koi acha story rok deta he pls tum to ESA mat Karo angel |
DUO-MRF chapter 5 . 10/12/2015 Very soft, smooth and soothing ending my doll... Enjoyed the bond of our DUO thoroughly... :) Thanks a lot guriya, keep smiling and stay safe and blessed... Love you loads... :-* |
DUO-MRF chapter 4 . 10/12/2015 Very beautiful and enjoyable chapter... Loved DUO's cute noke-jhok here and the scene of Daya sir going in that lady's camp was really hilarious and the inclusion of Abhijeet sir's mother is really soothing... :) Thanks a lot doll, keep smiling and stay safe and blessed... Love you loads... :-* |
DUO-MRF chapter 3 . 10/12/2015 :D :D :D :D :D Yeh iss waqt k mairy face k expressions hain, hahaha... :P ;) Very soothing, cute, lovely chapter bach'chy, enjoyed the whole thoroughly and just loved DUO here... Tight hug to you for this beautiful attempt... :-* :-* Thanks a lot guriya, keep smiling and stay safe and blessed... Love you loads... :-* |
DUO-MRF chapter 2 . 10/12/2015 Nice moving from heaven to world and world to heaven... :) Abhijeet sir ny wasey class sahi lagai apny friends ki, hehe aur Daya sir ka nakhra hamesha sy hi easa hi tha, hahaha... :P ;) Thanks a lot doll, keep smiling and stay safe and blessed... Love you loads... :) |
DUO-MRF chapter 1 . 10/12/2015 Hahahaha kya bach'cha jaan, pata hai humari larai hoty hoty bach'chi, hehe... ;) ;) Mairy DUO ko iss dunia sy wahan heaven jo pohancha dia aap ny, hahaha lekin pehli baar DUO ko heaven mein daikh ker bhi acha lg raha hai, hehehe... ;) ;) Thanks a lot doll, keep smiling and stay safe and blessed... Love you loads... :-* |
GD chapter 5 . 8/3/2015 Extremely Late Update Lose the Interest... Chapter Moving on Same Track as per My Idea... I was Surprised that why Daya Sir Not Contacted to CID Mumbai when not getting any Info of Abhijeet Sir in Last 8 Months (Obviously before Memory Loss Abhijeet Sir at CID Mumbai and he must Tell this to Daya na as Both were in Contact)... Abhijeet Sir Irriation, U Portrayed Nicely... Daya Sir Rona Dhona was Little More in presence of Officers from which He was Meeting First... Still I m Curious why U Titled that Story...? BTW, now u changed the Incident and if U showed Daya Sir just Joined now mean He was Not Responsible for Abhijeet Sir Memory Loss Incident na... Waitiing for that Reason... Thank you so much... |
DA95 chapter 5 . 8/2/2015 Superb...itna bada twisi..omg...nxt soon..byee..tc.. |
Mystic Morning chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 awesome clap clap happy friendship day deary |
AbhiDaya Fan chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 that was awesome chapy sweetu :) Loved Daya's emotions and Abhi's consoling. n nice twist too... great ! will be waiting for your next updates darl. take care sweetu. love u loads :) be happy always. |
Bhumi98 chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 Amazing |
shalu chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 wow beautiful chappy. T.C. |
artanish chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 nice chap...update soon! |
priya chapter 5 . 8/1/2015 awesome ... |
AbhiDaya Fan chapter 4 . 7/10/2015 sweetu... aap na bohuth naughty ho. hamesha suspense pe hi rukhthi ho :( Ab hame kithna din inthazaar kerna hogaaa :P huh. by the way... the chapy is fabulous ra. Loved our duo n their relation in your portrayal ! hm curious to read further :) n poor Daya... woke up the wrong person :P n Abhi laughing at him ! hahahaha. very nice. n u didn't tell us who is the third kid in our story ? how does he became friend with our duo ? |