man... poor darkwing.

Romance between a villian and a crimefighter, I love it! I love the pairing between DW and Steelie, and I knew that the romance could not last too long because of Steelie's affiliation with F.O.W.L!

Maybe the next slash story could be between Negaduck and Darkwing? Hint, Hint, Hint!

I knew those two were going to end up in the sack together! How romantic!

Yes, Darkwing Duck is very backwards when it comes to lovemaking!

I can't wait to read on! Sounds like our mighty masked mallard is truly love struck!

This is a great romance story!

Sounds like the stage is being set for a hot romance between Steelbeek and Darkwing!

HI! Well, you've got my attention on this one. I never would of thought of a crimefighter and a villian could have a relationship...well..I for one love it. Very cute!

I really enjoyed reading this story. The writer accurately captures Darkwing's and Steelbeek's true personalties. What I really like about this story is that it shows that Darkwing has a softer, caring side that he puts all differences aside, (even those of his arch enemies) and will listen to what other's have to say and understand their problems. Although I would rather see Darkwing have a relationship with Morgana. Great story, highly recommend.

You've been doing very well, RT, but this chapter was very confusing. It's not very clear to me what's going on. You might want to consider re-writing it.

Hello! This story is different then what I am used to, but it's interesting. Good Job

-Stef

Interesting story so far. I know I have more to read, LOL, it's late, and I'm tired, but I will finish reading. Thanks again for reviewing my story!

-Stef :)

You might want to re-write chapter two near the end. Darkwing's reaction is a bit abrupt and then you broke off at this sentence: "With his other hand, he slipped". Other than that, it's fine.

EEEEE! Next part, next part! (*wags her racoon tail*) Pleeeeeeeeaaassssee!

So don't read it, Nightw2, I'm sure it's not going to follow you home! 8) There are story styles and subject matter that I don't particularly like either, but I wouldn't want to tell the author what to write or not to write.

Although I do like to offer advice on *how* to write, if people want to hear it. For example, if this *is* a slash story, I feel obliged to say this story has a somewhat predictable opening device. (On a side note, I wonder how many porn movies use police officers frisking suspects to initiate a sex scene.) Also, it puzzles me that Steelbeak would be doing what seems rather bourgeouis (sp?) crime-isn't shoplifting more the sort of thing that he would send Eggmen to do? But maybe there's more to it than that. But on the other hand, the dialogue on the parts of the characters is strong: Steelbeak sounds like Steelbeak, Darkwing sounds like Darkwing. A question: is Officer Rottweil going to come back? He actually made a rather strong presence for just a throwaway character.

No offense, RT, but PLEASE, not more slash. Again, it's no insult to your writing skills; it's my upbringing that's at fault. I was willing to endure ONE slash fic from you, and, while it WAS a good one, it didn't sway me from my male/female beliefs. I respect other writers' right to right what they want, but, if this IS slash, as I fear; I'm afraid I won't be reading any more of this story (a shame too, by my own admission).

Bravo! Roaming! Bravo! Love the frisking scene. Keep it up! Can't wait to read the rest. Steelie and Darkwing Hahahah. *Holds back a very annoyed and hurt Bushroot.*