PLEASE UPDATE

You should do an AU to this; like what if Gray AND Ana had been shot, Ana dies instantly but Owen makes it in time to save Gray? Idk that idea just struck me.

Zach might not come back. If you remember this line:
"I'm gonna be gone in two years anyway."
It is suggested that Zach will be going off to college. On the other hand we may see an older, more matured gray.

Am I the only one who pictures Lucy Hale/ Aria from PLL as Ana?

OMFG BEST STORY EVER I LOVED IT! THIS WAS SO GOOD!

I enjoyed this I thought it was well written.

Actually, Dr. Grant (that was his name, right?) from the first movie DOES suffer from PTSD. In the third one, you're shown a nightmare he's having, in which the raptors are present.

Love it.

Hi:) I love this story so so much! Please hurry and update:) you were in surgery? OMG are you ok? That probably explains why you haven't been updating:( anyway hope you get better and can update a whole lot more:)

Pls pls pls update I need an update

Sorry I couldn't comment last chapter, but know I still love your story, and I understand about the situation, just take it easy for a while and don't force yourself.

Yes. Please continue. I just started to read and i am enjoying this very, very much. Love the relationship between both Owen and Claire, and Grey and Zach. I am really curious what will happen when Owen and Claire leave,and how Grey and Zach will cope with them gone. So please, please, please continue.

When the author said this is all I have, did they mean that the fanfic was over coz I really liked this one and I'm gonna be sad if this is the end

This is a great story! Also, I hope you're feeling loads better after your surgery; I know for a fact that anaesthetic can really take it out of you, so take it easy, okay? :P Us readers can wait for updates, but you've got to get yourself well first! x

Sorry I didn't had time to comment your chapter 11! But here I'm to comment about both!:D I really liked it so much, in chapter 11 because you wrote about Claire and Owen first date, and it was kind of cute! Owen is very silly sometimes, but he really have a good heart especially around Claire, the way he makes she feels safe, happy and especially the first option. I'm sure its something she admires a lot on him! I liked that you talked about their parents, its always said when parents compare their sons and daughters!D: But I enjoyed the chapter a lot especially, when she said she loves Owen too, I'm sure she does! She's just scared and the PTSD isn't helping her to understand her feelings!

About chapter 12: I liked it so much, I was asking about brotherly fluff... XD And I enjoyed it so much, even being shorter! I really feel sorry for Zach can't remember his family, and being sick! When he had his memories it was easier to him handle but now that he forgot everything he's having a very bad time!D: At least they and Gray are there for each other, but it stills sad because it looks like, Gray stills sad over Zach, and Zach don't remember nothing so he can't properly say sorry to Gray! I have a question Gray is afraid of the moment the Indominus tug his clothes right? Does he know that Zach was the one who saved him that moment? It was Zach who kicks aways the indominus from his little brother! I don't know maybe if Gray knew this he would be more comfortable around his older brother, and this will help they getting close again! Well I don't understand so much about PSTD stories, this is the first one i'm reading, but I think this count as something, right?XD Or not?D:

OMG you are at hospital?D: Are you feeling better now? How was the surgery? I wish you get better soon! And don't force yourself too much, we your readers can wait you get better!3