This is so completey out of character. I tried continuing on but this isnt even in the same world as the show. Everyone's character was off.

Great story. I didn't want to put it down. Been a long time since I found a story like that. Only criticism that I will say is please, please, please triple check spelling &I grammar. Did I say please? Also double check if your sentences have the correct words in the right place(s) & you aren' missing words.
The only reason I say this is because with my health I read quite a bit, especially when I cannot get outta bed. It distracts me & I lose my place also my concentration is broken. You did a nice job, Probie!

So, now caught up with this story and looking forward to the sequel. Well done.

Good ending. It was wrapping up in one way. Can't wait for the sequel to see what has been going on more with them. And any word on the other three.

I liked the end that everyone is healed as well as they could be and ready to move on with life

Can't wait!

It was good. I was only hoping that Tony would of got together with Ziva at the end.

This was a beautiful story. So many times I was brought to tears as I read the chapters. Happily anticipating the sequel!

I'm glad their happy again.:)

Glad all the boys have found that light at the end of the long tunnel

If the next chapter is the last, please let it come out to everyone that Senior had targeted Tony the night of the accident...maybe the jailbirds will finally realize that Tony was never the reason that Tori was killed. Thanks for all your hard work.

Good so glad that all of them are doing good. And really being able to move on. Plus the three of them are a family that is great. I hope that jimmy can find out what happened though. It would give him an extra piece of mind. Even Tony. At least with Tori and what happened.

I'm glad their being locked away.

glad the terrible three some are going to jail. Not surprised Ed got off with insanity plea.
sad that Tony had to find out about his father and his actions.
glad the boys are finally able to heal.

Poor Tony. At least, he knows the truth!