Great story is the sequel still gonna be written or released?

what an interesting story and so well written (unusual for al ot of fanfic) - I really like the focus on Owen's raising/training of the pack as well as the differences with the other packs and the resulting carnage - look forward to reading more of your work

Amazing story with a great focus on believability, while I haven't seen the movie, this story feels a lot more realistic and sensible in all the decisions and characters. Nothing "just happens" and there is no great evil scheme or plot/ulterior purpose, which I quite enjoyed.

I really hope that a sequel will come around at some point

Though there was a few things I didn't understand, like why bait raptors on a chase instead of dropping sedated meat nearby, and not informing the other paddocks about the control panel issue when first discovered by the ACU

Hey is the sequel for this ever going up?

Wow

Ah, the robot CEO. Better than just the one who does nasty things for their own sake. It honestly feels like she just doesn't have a clue while thinking she does about animals, and that Owen doesn't know enough about management. They both have good points, they just are ether not speaking each others language, not willing to hear for whatever reason, or dont have satisfying heart motive behind it and it shows.

Man, if I was Owen I would have made sure to know the pressure points/sensitive areas of the critters. Better than breaking your fist on bone.

Enjoyed till the very end can't wait made me sad actually

You did a wonderful job on this story!
I'm hooked and I love the interaction between Owen and the pack, but also how you guaranteed the raptors survive with that signature written earlier in the story.

I look forward to this other work you have written.

I think Owen may have just made an enemy, or possibly made himself a possible alpha of that other pack. Hmmm

That sinking feeling when you get the worse part of the job!

This is nicely written and the plot very thought out. I like where it's going and how your characterised each individual.

Nice

wow, did not consider that ending. Great story though.

must. Have. SEQUEL!