| Reviews for Hey There |
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Toni Masen chapter 2 . 7/19 A very entertaining family! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2019 I'm stuck on the fact that the kids are bringing home slut or girls like. Edward didn't bring anyone but Bella home you'd think he'd teach his sons this as well. You don't fool around in their house or bring home whores to meet your mother. No dating or even kissing till your 16 and that goes for the girls as well. Edward slept with girls when he was in high school but he didn't do anything in his home he had his car or wherever else |
archy12 chapter 2 . 12/16/2018 Another entertaining chapter! :) |
archy12 chapter 1 . 12/16/2018 Wow, so many kids, I had to go through them twice before I got who was whose and what age and looks, and also who was into who...okay, too many who(s) here. :P Very entertaining! |
EdwardLoverForever13 chapter 2 . 3/4/2018 Absolutely love this story! Will you continue this story? |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/20/2018 Wondering why it's not a rule that you can't bring whore to the house or to meet your mother. Edward never did that to his mom so wouldn't he tell his sons not to do that to Bella. That's my only complaint out of this story |
Redblueblackroses chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 Hey! Both these stories are amazing! Plz update soon! It's been over a year! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/18/2017 Please update! Love this story! |
elizabeth bennette chapter 2 . 6/5/2017 Good Luck! Glad you are feeling better. Wouldn't let me post it in Chapter 3. |
MaryKitty chapter 1 . 5/22/2017 Hope you update soon! |
petmom1213 chapter 3 . 2/1/2017 I hope you're well now. And I hope all of your dreams come true. This story is so good. I'm sure there is so much more that could be written here. Please write more. |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/28/2017 Wouldn't the rule be... Don't bring a whore to meet your mother. So Amy shouldn't have ever stepped foot in there house. Nate could of fooled around else where. Also why wouldn't he just kiss another girl in front of Amy or make her and other know they aren't dating. Why would Nate let her have a meal with family as well. Bella should have told her she wasn't welcome. Long this story but that part makes no sense |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/23/2017 Congrats on the new endeavor! But please finish this story! I have laughed and enjoyed this story soooo much! |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2016 Good luck with everything! Please let us know whenyoy have the book published. |
PreciousJuls chapter 1 . 10/6/2016 These kids are too much. So much fun to read! |