Ok look, I get it, she's hot. But enough with the dudes hitting on her, especially her coworkers. Ian, Dave, Bartender, Owen(Clearly genuinely cares), like, god damn. Whose next? Mr. Maserani?

Billy of all people should be one of the most reluctant to see the Raptors. He shouldn't be insisting he see because, "I'm Billy!" but to satisfy old paranoia to make sure they'd never escape.

Oh thank god you didn't go for that cliche.

So, let me guess, Fiona acted apologetic and shit but Lloyd is gonna be at the mainland, they'll run off, and Finn will only find out later when she gets a text from her aunt asking her hey, where's Fiona?

Claire had some character flaws in the first movie, no denying it. She was way too focused on finance and the parks success. But I don't believe she'd be this much of a insensitive bitch. It's a bit unrealistic how cold and dickish she is.

Awesome. Wow!

Loved the update hope the next one comes soon

Yaaaaaay! Everytime there's a new chapter, my soul is happy! And this one was soooooo cute!

You have absolutely NO idea how happy I was when I saw the notification that this story had been updated! New chapter is wonderful! Please continue to write more amazing chapters! _

Please update really soon please

While the writing is goof i feel this sgould be more classified as drama than horror or adventure baded on the content

Thank you for updating this story!

Awesome story so far!

MORE OMG I LOVE THIS STORY

YAAAAAAASSSSS! I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE BACK! ABOUT HAD A HEART ATTACK WHEN I SAW THE NOTIFICATION AT WORK! Hope things smooth out for you with school and what not and please continue this amazing story! _