Evil Danzobaka.

Kayaii!

as much as look forward to another chapter. i'm also scared to ;-; i dun wan either of his sisters to die. i was expecting minato to be a casualty. I'll cry if it's hitomi or even hikari.

Man what a story you are writing and with a different pairing. This story continues, it's perfect.

There should be more chapters to this story then 13 chapters.

please update

I disagree with your team 8, it was meant to be a tracking team, why sith out Jobs, someone who will never be more than a grade-A tracker and an okay fighter, with Naruto, someone who would not be good at tracking, but a great fighter?

Pretty good except for the misspelling of rant.

i love this story i hope it will be continued soon...

for someone who is not a native English speaker i think you did well dont let the jackasses in the comments get to you because 1 they probably didn't even realize you said that and 2 i have seen natives do a WHOLE lot worse then you good story mane

Dude. You made Kushina manipulate Naruto. Because like all Uchiha, Naruto happens to love his family so much he never wants to disappoint them. Smh

I dont understand why Naruto’s mother keeps coddling him. He is a shinobi, and some day he could be killed and only one jutsu could be that turning point to saving his life. They should be training him into the ground because of their profession. Another reason I hate female characters in Naruto, even though I am a female, reading and seeing the kind of people Kunoichi are, is disappointing

Oh for fuck's sake, don't do stupid shitty plot holes. Minato knew about Danzo and his organization and here you make danzo a super stealthy guy

ahh, come on, you think Minato is STUPID HAH? you though he didnt even know how Danzo operation when he become hokage hah? what a stupid reason to continue the plot

You're a fucking idiot. THE STORY HAS SO MANY FUCKING MISTAKES!