I like the story, but the writing, especially the switching between 1st and 3rd person, is very annoying. If you want to write a with both views, have the 1dt person to be kind of like an inner dialogue, or maybe have them write a diary of sorts. Else than that, it's very good.

Not exactly a fan of the tried and true plagiarism of the whole Percy Jackson story without changing literally anything aside from a few snippets of dialogue, but this is probably one of the better done ones. No stupidly long 6 foot katana's (seriously, that would be impossible to wield) but a simple xiphos and bow. Nice touch on how only her patronus can kill dementors. Hoping my questions raised by this one will be explained in the sequel, unless it's a basic copy of Riordan's work again.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Thanks for another very enjoyable chapter

Definitely another enjoyable chapter, thanks

Definitely an enjoyable first chapter

girlfriend. rape victim. same difference.

You do a good job with the fight scenes

Fufufu! Loved the cake scene!

I was originally thrown off by Andi's personality, she was so different from Harry that I wondered why you even presented this fic as a crossover. Now I love the sassy little brat. Percy was always a bit thick (seaweed for brains), Annabeth was "proper", and Grover tended to bleet and cower. Having a new character added to the mix who rolls her eyes every time Zeus shakes the heavens and mutters about the king being an emo drama queen adds a great deal of humor to the story.

it's like u supplanted Harry's (andi w/e to-may-to to-mah-to) personality with zeus'...not sure if I like it or not
her fatal flaw: being her daddy's clone

i wonder if the hype will wear done and andromeda will full realize her dad is king of the alpowerful douchebags

also compared to your daughter of hades stories, how do these stack up in your opinion? which one do you like more?

do you still have the original story?

Good story so far. I will say, Percy has a good position in their argument that he really doesn’t use. He would have been much better off if he yelled something about ‘How was I supposed to know your(Andi’s) plan?’ After all Andi just up and vanished without telling anyone, something she does a lot and this could have been a good lesson for her that other people think differently and can’t read her mind. From Percy’s perspective, Andi could have been anywhere: at the front following Annabeth’s plan, in the seats hiding, or about to kill one of the furies. If he’d done nothing, he would have been lucky, because Andi went with option 3, but why roll the dice like that.

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